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New World new worl new world

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Moe_Cyan_Pile
Moe_Cyan_PileAuthorMoe_Cyan_Pile

y'all just a notice. this version is dropped. there is an rewrite version coming in this late August, but only on Wattpad. the rewrite would only come on webnovel by mid September or early October. sorry yall

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Moe_Cyan_Pile
Moe_Cyan_PileAuthorMoe_Cyan_Pile

Read it Then after reading it you can ask me on some points if there is availability for improvements or not then thanks for reading it ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜...

He6ou3eMJI9l
He6ou3eMJI9lLv3He6ou3eMJI9l

In all these years (probably more than 100 years exactly), The Philippines have finally left its development state. Debts - paid, Economy - booming, Military power - In the worlds top 10 strongest countries. The country had achieved heights no one ever saw and now, one of the worlds leading countries in technology advancement. Achieving Nano-technology to the third leader on the start of the intergalactic missions. hahahahahahahahahhahahahaha

Hukague
HukagueLv5Hukague

Love the story. Almost same concept as Summoning Japan but a more interesting story. There some misspelled words but all in all it is still readable. I will be recommending this to my friends. Keep up the good work Author.

Thenceforth
ThenceforthLv12Thenceforth

Good job, I like how you flesh out the characters and build the world of this story. This would be time consuming to finish but I hope for you to finish it, unlike me, who barely have time to read much less continue writing mine.

Night_In_Gale
Night_In_GaleLv1Night_In_Gale

First its good to read and hope for more like this filnovels after reading it, I would love it as I will go on another culture aside japan isekaid. But I prefer to know the mc. And finally the author emphasizes the good-nature jolly behavior of Filipinos which I love the most. Support this!

MaxwellKHA
MaxwellKHALv4MaxwellKHA

Let's just say that I know what I'm doing. The concept of the story is good and the way the author executes it, is ok. My advice is that the author gave more action scene because it is quite lacking in my opinion. I think maybe try Antimatter bomb.

garetginsom
garetginsomLv1garetginsom

Very good novel so far, would like a better background view of the current Philippines country and how advanced they are actualy and how they work politicaly. What systems are in place and how is law and order preserved and what about any corruption in the country? Many novels similar to this one give apropriat back ground and show the full arsonal of the country (satalites they have luanched, what is the extent to thier power ect). Would like to go indepth with any military protocals or how they are planning to protect a country they have a treaty with.

Darlene_Virginia
Darlene_VirginiaLv4Darlene_Virginia

This is definitely a different story which is out of the world but literally, the country actually moved out to another world!!! The author has great imaginative skills. Just a slight suggestion though, I saw a few paragraphs which are too lengthy. If you could reduce it into small ones, it would look much better. It is just a suggestion, as always author knows the best! Happy writing!

richy_ket
richy_ketLv3richy_ket

Nice novel, had a very good read so far! I prefer to mainly focus on the countries interaction with other inhabitants so certian chapters take away my engagment some what, like the auction one. However that was still a very entertaining chapter and it never became boring. There are many things you have to keep track on in this novel and since its in its early stages it can feel slow and jumbled compared to other novels like it. But im sure author has something in mind to tie everything together eventualy. Cant wait to see how it will progress and hope to have a better understanding of the other countries surrounding Philippines and how thier technologies and systems match up!

laenahtan
laenahtanLv1laenahtan

I never been bored reading this unlike the other na nabasa ko sa wattpad grabe lahat sila, every line/ story and characters here are beautiful. Wala na akong mahihiling pa maliban sa bagong chapter, kakatapos ko lang ng chapter70 at hihintayin ko yung iba. Sana makakuha ito ng update sa lalong madaling panahon.

Fabrice_Ouvrard
Fabrice_OuvrardLv1Fabrice_Ouvrard

In its entirety, it was an entertaining read. Would recommend to anyone if they had the time to. Could use some writing improvements, like use of words, pacing of plot, and chronological order of plot. Though regardless, the concept and plot are very intresting to say the least.

IntrovertedBoss_2
IntrovertedBoss_2Lv1IntrovertedBoss_2

i'm here because someone posted this at our Heavenly fb group. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

SPBasilio
SPBasilioLv12SPBasilio

will the author come back and continue this?? I think this is a very interesting novel, i like it so far. I hope the author continues it soon.

Kenringdomstorys
KenringdomstorysLv1Kenringdomstorys

Hey there! Here are someย web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

Ken_Ringdomstory
Ken_RingdomstoryLv1Ken_Ringdomstory

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Quartermaster
QuartermasterLv3Quartermaster

I just dont know how the hell government keep hiding the fact that Philippines transported to another world and no one suspicious a bit specially most of PH folk are ofw so they want to call their family abroad and no Internet lol

NotUse
NotUseLv4NotUse

Overall, the content of the story is great. I am a filipino too, so I really like how you made a story about our country. The plot is interesting and attention grabbing for me, plus the characters are lovable. The word background is described profoundly. Nice work author!!! ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ

BitterSweetPam
BitterSweetPamLv1BitterSweetPam

All I could say is HOLY WOW! Its time for Philippines to take a leap. I love how you included the military knowledge to the first chapter and how you build around it. Still reading onto chapter 2 but I can tell this story is one of a kind

Saint_Lord
Saint_LordLv1Saint_Lord

It is good,just needs some polishing here and there. it is a bit slow personally besides that all is good.take your time in updating, prioritize your well being especially because of the covid 19