Moe_Cyan_Pile
In all these years (probably more than 100 years exactly), The Philippines have finally left its development state. Debts - paid, Economy - booming, Military power - In the worlds top 10 strongest countries. The country had achieved heights no one ever saw and now, one of the worlds leading countries in technology advancement. Achieving Nano-technology to the third leader on the start of the intergalactic missions. hahahahahahahahahhahahahaha
Very good novel so far, would like a better background view of the current Philippines country and how advanced they are actualy and how they work politicaly. What systems are in place and how is law and order preserved and what about any corruption in the country? Many novels similar to this one give apropriat back ground and show the full arsonal of the country (satalites they have luanched, what is the extent to thier power ect). Would like to go indepth with any military protocals or how they are planning to protect a country they have a treaty with.
This is definitely a different story which is out of the world but literally, the country actually moved out to another world!!! The author has great imaginative skills. Just a slight suggestion though, I saw a few paragraphs which are too lengthy. If you could reduce it into small ones, it would look much better. It is just a suggestion, as always author knows the best! Happy writing!
Nice novel, had a very good read so far! I prefer to mainly focus on the countries interaction with other inhabitants so certian chapters take away my engagment some what, like the auction one. However that was still a very entertaining chapter and it never became boring. There are many things you have to keep track on in this novel and since its in its early stages it can feel slow and jumbled compared to other novels like it. But im sure author has something in mind to tie everything together eventualy. Cant wait to see how it will progress and hope to have a better understanding of the other countries surrounding Philippines and how thier technologies and systems match up!
I never been bored reading this unlike the other na nabasa ko sa wattpad grabe lahat sila, every line/ story and characters here are beautiful. Wala na akong mahihiling pa maliban sa bagong chapter, kakatapos ko lang ng chapter70 at hihintayin ko yung iba. Sana makakuha ito ng update sa lalong madaling panahon.
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Overall, the content of the story is great. I am a filipino too, so I really like how you made a story about our country. The plot is interesting and attention grabbing for me, plus the characters are lovable. The word background is described profoundly. Nice work author!!! ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ๐ต๐ญ