ValestriaMoon
Writing Quality: Way better than most; delightful to read Stability of updates: I binged my way through all the chapters so far in one sitting. I did glance at the dates for each chapter and it looks like the story is updated regularly. Story Development: I really don't like that the MC seems to run into overly nice, helpful, trusting people everywhere. It doesn't seem like the MC encounters meaningful challenges. The plot armor seems a little too strong to me. Otherwise, the story telling is pretty good. Character Design: The MC is very likeable. I like the fact that the System in this story also seems to have some personality to it. Still too early for me to say much about the other characters as most other characters aren't too developed yet. World Background: I like the fact that we discover the world gradually as the MC does. There is no giant info dump to slog through. The world is still somewhat mysterious and I am looking forward the the way it is gradually developed. Overall: I'm really liking the story so far. I'd be really surprised if this doesn't become one of the more popular, trending stories in the future.
Just the first few chapters and you are hooked. Good development, easy to follow, great plot and unlike the classical reincarnation novels there are no death by suicide, murder or something, so very straight forward. The system can converse so it is a bit different from the classic, and I gotta say we have the same idea-ish in mind. Keep up the good work! And I added the book to the library, looking forward to further updates!