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Reviews of New life in starwars

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New life in starwars

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  • Writing Quality
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  • Story Development
  • Character Design
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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13Tonyorobsky

You started a story with 5 filler chapters out of 6. And they had nothing to do with Star Wars. And they weren’t very funny. And they brought nothing to the dull protagonist.

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

First 9 chapters are just random filler that’s not even part of the story.... was hoping for a Star Wars fanfic with 10 chapters not 9filler then an info dump about a solar system but hopefully it’ll get better once the plot starts

ActiveRagdoll
ActiveRagdollLv4ActiveRagdoll

This is the first time I have read a prologue and not been wanting to skip it to get to the main story already. I genuinely am intrested to see where you take this author, you have my ear.

silentpassenger90
silentpassenger90Lv13silentpassenger90

I agree with the previous review, I didn't want to skip the Prologue at all. It was funny and added to the story. I like the way this story is ramping up. I am glad that the author decided to go away from the system route and that the goals of the MC are not over reaching. He has over all goals that are achieveable and would have a huge impact on the universe. over all well done!

stinkclaw
stinkclawLv14stinkclaw

I really enjoy what I've read so far I hope to see it continue. I hope you continue with quite a bit of space mercantilism And as per standard mind **** a few jedi with facts and logic.

KoroSensei14
KoroSensei14Lv14KoroSensei14

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Enjoyteddy
EnjoyteddyLv12Enjoyteddy

I know people are saying the first 9 chaps are worthless but I enjoyed them and this they are a great set up. I also like where your going with the story and am enjoying the journey!

moon
moonLv13moon

Great story love the whale . I am mostly doing this for the badge but I do like the story. I love Star Wars FanFiction. I can deal with the slow updates because the content is so good.

oscar_moreno
oscar_morenoLv4oscar_moreno

The story is interesting, the premise is good I haven't seen another like it. Can't wait for the next chapter to see were it goes from here.

Xandalar
XandalarLv13Xandalar

even though it starts with a lot of filler it's really intriguing I really like it. Keep it up and pls no dropu ,.........................................................

Necrolie_Pepin
Necrolie_PepinLv14Necrolie_Pepin

You started of pretty good but you need a little more detail in both background and world for both MC and the R.O.B. the story so far is good and I did like the random world jumping in the start just work on the writing and detail other than that great work.