CrispyNoodle
First of all, writing quality and update stability gets full marks. Now, story, character and world are terrible. As a fanfic of CCG, I expect the comedy, the slice of life, the organic character interactions of the original from a fresh perspective. Not this abomination of a power fantasy. Shuhang is OP in the original, but he gets OP over the course of so many chapters and each power-up is accompanied by a lot of trials and tribulations. That makes each one seem hard won. You took my favourite webnovel and turned it into this toxic mess. I read through it all, in the hope that it would improve slightly given enough time. I was willing to be extremely tolerant just so I could have a larger morsel of the world of CCG each day than the original could provide. But this.... this abomination... just no.
i give you star hope fast update dont be lazy dude πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Thanks for the chapter. I think they react that way because in fanfiction as you use another story as a template for yours the charcters we as readers if we have an idea of how a carΓ‘cter is an when is genderbended we don't really know what to expect in particular it doesn't bother me if you choose use one but you have to take into account personality of the carΓ‘cter and the way you want the story to go, that way you don't make errors or try to change many things and make more difficult to follow the flow of the story.
CCG fanfic? Fvck 5 star ill give 5 star!!!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ CCG fanfic? Fvck 5 star ill give 5 star!!!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ CCG fanfic? Fvck 5 star ill give 5 star!!!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
'Private opinion' 'I never read cannon' I don't see why people like original story they cultivate in modern times and have massager what so amazing I can't see so far. In this story however I can see you try to create better mc which you accomplish in 47% for my taste he is still pussy. You focus like 60% story plot explaining his powers and why is he so OP and how he can become more powerful which for me I skipable part so you leave me with 15% messenger chat which I don't understand and skip as well I don't know these people and don't give a single **** about them so why bother reading theirs ****. Next 15% some Revenge/Slaughter of people I don't know because I skip chat and his powers explanation so I skip that as well. And last part 10% his relationships and interaction with female which is interesting but to damn little to keep me reading this story. GL HF in future.
Huhuhu, I wish the novel's continuation cuz I love the plot π but it seems like there won't be a new chapter... I guess that this novel is dropped... No, It's absolutely got dropped as it's already 3 years without updatingπ What a great fanfiction, it died before it shows it's real brilliance π
Itβs a good FanFic to read while waiting for more chapters in your other novels. While the original has a light hearted comedic undertone, this FanFic is more of a realistic cultivation story. It has most of the characters you loved from the original but at the center of it all is the authors own take on the MC. The MC this time is still the βsameβ person but just a different personality. Overall you shouldnβt look at this as the same CCG but rather a unique take on a cultivation novel using already exsisting material. I would rate it a 4/5 but if someone went through and edited the chapters fixing some minor spelling errors and there was a faster, constant release time then it had the potential to be a 5/5 must read work.
I want to enjoy a fanfic of CCG but I personally can't enjoy the direction this takes. Spelling mistakes and just general blandness quickly extinguish any immersion I get from this story. There's also the fact that the beginning is a standard isekai opener where the MC takes the boatload of powerwank abilities that makes any sense of potential conflict shatter into a million pieces. This proceeds to rip the original novel's cultivation levels to shreds by jumping the MC straight up to Stage 3 in the first few chapters. 3 stars for effort, but this isn't the novel for me.
Okay, I like this story a lot. I really want to see how far this goes βcause I love the original. I only have one problem with this story, female characters design. In the original, the female characters were fleshed out whereas here the first two female characters immediately βfall forβ the MC. I can get the situation with sixteen because, you know, blood connection. But soft feather liking him came out of nowhere. I have a gut feeling this is going in the rout of βany available female Character will be in the harem,β and thatβs not particularly my cup of tea. I checked the reviews and comments to see if you indicated that this was a harem and I couldnβt find one. So Iβll just be blunt, is this a harem? I want to know if I should invest time into reading this and I donβt particularly like harems so it would be good to know early. Other than the pairing debate, I love this fic.