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Good book but the MC is useless, he’s dumb (maybe even autistic) , cowardly, he’s a beta when it comes to females and gets dragged around by the plot. To be honest this story wlulf be way more interesting without Liam, he brings nothing to it and instead ruins it with chapters dedicated to him just to never change. I enjoyed most other characters, they’re mostly 3 Dimensional and entertaining but I can’t bring myself to read another chapter of Liam being a r3tard, I lose braincells every chapter.
ok I used to dislike MCs who were too submissive but for some reason the reasoning he gives behind his actions is something that I as a reader realised after reading tons of novels....good work no arrogant mc but one with a brain...my wronged heart is at peace from the overused cliches in other books... especially...M T L Chinese novels...plz update soon..
Keep up the good work author. I'll love to see the legendary end of this story.[img=update]
From what I read before the review, most of it is Gucci. The writing quality is practically tip-top, aside from some slight typos. The paragraphs are well-aired. The flow is good. It is updated daily, so that is a five-star right there. As for the development and design part, it looks all good from where I stand :) Keep this up author, you got this :)
Thanks guys. I'm grateful, I'll do my best to improve.
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👀 Don't dare stop writing. I need two chaps per day
overall nice story. Just need to work on your grammar. Though It's your first work so I understand.
Believer_X, your are making me hungry for more chaps. Just keep sending them for me.
I really love this novel, just hope the author has the strength to see it to the end.
An excellent story, though some grammatical error here and there, I believe the author is improving.
Ahem. Don't look at me strangely... Nice storyline, hope you keep up the good work, and also improve along the way.