Royalspike
Its interesting but sooo much info and sooo little story...change this....make MC op....i dont really know what the suggest or ask as this is sasuke...I always thought he was a privileged cunt... so I guess make him a less of a cunt,,,,,,OP MC...one man army..[this is quite literally sasuke and his ancestors style,,,,they do **** by themselves whilst naruto and his ancestor gets the help from others]...world travel no doubt cause otherwise it would be boring..I suggest bleach or highschool dxd or fairytail a few hundred years before cannon [mostly bleach]...add some romance and fluff..also build the damn romance..no sad ****...make MC leave village [once again its his style]..make him learn snake sage....if harem keep it small...bash characters..its fun...also **** sakura..listen those who like her...like her,,,but we all know that she was useless and a bit mental....loved the guy that literally tired to kill her...ignored the guy that was always there,,,,though let it be known that I support narn x hina.... Anyway goodluck and goodshow
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