61 Weilder of scythe of darkest flame 1

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"Well, it seems father has taken interest in this planet after all." says Alice

"The scythe of the darkest flame, why is it here?" asked the Ancient one.

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While the Scythe of darkest flame was entering Earth, and alerting shield, back in the serpent realm Cul was currently sitting on his throne as he gazed off into space, when suddenly Bard appeared kneeling before him.

" Bard, what's the matter?"

" Your majesty, one of the the worthy has gone towards Midgard."

"Mhm, only one?" asked Cul

" Yes master."

" Well that fine, as long as they don't rush there at once there is no problem."

" Master if I may?"

" Go ahead Bard."

" Master, I have known you for years, What exactly is your plan for that planet?" asked Bard.

"Bard, that planet is about to become the gathering place for many powerful being in the universe, ifs in my best interest, and the best interest the serpent realm if things are kept under me control."

" Is that why you let the princess go there?"

" Of course."

" Is that also why the worthy haven't been used in the last couple years?"

" They are incomparable to what they were when I first made them, having more things at play on Midgard would be to my benefit as well, first it will be the Scythe of darkest flame, then another, then another, until all of them have been gathered on Midgard, after all I have no intention of making a move personally anytime soon, unless something out of my expectations happens." answers Cul.

" Then, I will wait for the time when you make your move, or require me to make one." says Bard.

" Good, things will be moving faster than you expect, I will be finished with this planet in thirty years the most." says Cul.

After Cul said that, Bard nodded and teleported out of the room leaving Cul alone.

" I really wonder how many will die before someone passes the test to wield the Scythe, and just who will be able to wield it, will it be one of my followers or some random human." says Cul as genuine interest appears in his eyes.

" It seems the amount of things I find interesting have decreased apart from pursuing power, and my family things have become dull, but thing will get interesting soon, and I should probably send less time sitting on my throne, and spend some time with Gaea and mother."

(Back on Earth)

After the Scythe entered Earth and crashed landed, both Alice and and the Ancient one disappeared from there spot.

Alice just teleported, while the Ancient one makes a circle and sees through it.

They both appear, in the dessert, look at a Scythe standing up right stuck in the ground.

The pressure emitted from the Scythe was powerful, very powerful, but it was currently controlled and wasn't directly affecting anything around it.

Alice looked at the weapon and dropped next to it, while the Ancient one kept her distance, when Alice stretched out her hand to grab the Scythe, it pressure completely disappeared, as it became completely tame.

As Alice hand grabs hold of the Scythe, her consciousness is pulled into the weapon, and she didn't resist.

Alice consciousness appeared in a dark space as a serpent made of black fire appeared before her.

" I pay respects to the princess."

" There is no need, I just want to know, did father send you?" asked Alice.

" Yes and no."

" Explain, further."

" Master knew I was coming here but didn't stop me, so it could be said that he wants me here as if he didn't want me here I wouldn't be here."

" I'm guessing he didn't tell you his plans."

" Of course not, the Master's mind is unfathomable, if even the princes and the princess can't know what he's thinking, who am I to presume to know master's mind." said the huge fire serpent

" You're right, i guess I can only wait and see how thing play out."says Alice.

" I'm leaving now, I wish you luck in finding a wielder, even though it would take a while on this planet." After saying this Alice simple controlled her consciousness back into her body.

" Did you find out why it's here?" asked the Ancient one.

"I didn't, but even if I did do you really think I would tell you?" asked Alice

" I'm going to be moving around this planet for a while, I don't like to be spied on, so I'll warn you once, you spied on me once and caught me in a good mood, but I can't guarantee I will be in a good mood next time, and who knows I might just Kill you or some human to get back in a good mood." says Alice in her normal silky voice.

"As long as you don't do anything, to endanger this planet, you can do as you please." says the Ancient one as she creates another portal and leaves.

"Like if you had any other choice, but I guess it's important to you to feel like you're in control even if your not." says Alice as she to disappears.