Lruska
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Having read the first novel for Nero and now editing the second one, I've come to fall in love with the characters all over again. This time especially, the contrast of light and dark elements in the story has been very captivating. Even though it is partially a retelling of the original, it is also quite unique and I'm excited to see the diverging path that we'll travel as the story progresses. Keep up the good work Lruska! :)
Overall, the writing is fine. My big complaint is the consistency of updates. Lately the story is lucky to see more than 1 chapter a month, and these chapters aren't very long. Added to this, despite the trickle of content, the author has decided to now add a 3rd tier of priv. I can't see this as anything other than gouging when you can't even be sure you'll get a chapter this month. The book's okay, but no definite release schedule, paired with a slow release rate, makes the author's practices with privilege chapters scummy at best. Do not recommend as things currently are.
Grammar and spelling is very good Idk why the author feels the need to reiterate that Nero is beautiful constantly and describe random peoples thoughts/reactions to how she looks. you should just describe other characters thoughts about the main character when they are important and/or introducing them.
alright Mr author I'm now binge reading all your books! Love the concept of this book the only thing I'd have to gripe about is that when reading this I would forget that she was a he at some point. I don't know if that was intended or not but it doesn't really detract from the book unless you're planning on making it play a bigger part? you could easily swap the MC gender at the beginning and literally nothing would change in the plot atm