Muffin_Time
Writing is an art. Giving 1 star to a story is akin throwing rotten eggs to a painting just because you don't like it. Please note that you don't pay to read this fanfic. Just like someone offering you his cooking, you don't spit it on his face and said to other 'don't eat his cooking, it taste bad' Don't get me wrong, critics are good, but telling others to not read it is just as bad as killing ideas
Hi, I just got done reading your novel. I have to say I really like your story. It's very entertaining--keep on coming with the updates. Please don't stop halfway with the novel. I really want to see how your version of Naruto plays off. On behalf of me and all your fans, thank you for having the inspiration, patience, and courage to write this novel. Please keep the updates coming, thank you.
Haha this is what you call extraordinary why? Because the Mc dies not only that he doesn't go and be op like others it like the first chapter haha my my this is what you call a good fan fiction you should finish this it would bring you benefits in your writing skills as an author muffin time and this is what all I could say as a 3-4 years of being a Daoist my self haha. Good luck.
I love this story! For me the most amazing aspect is the character design. The author took the limited room provided by a fanfic and developed a relatable but still cool and interesting mc, who's slightly op but because of his hard work, not from relying on random power boosts from the system. I also love how he fits into the original naruto world, and his reincarnation system. Moreover, he's the first mc I've found that's equally focused on combat and medical ninjutsu. This novel is much better than most generic fanfics, and I can't recommend it enough!
Writing quality is excellent, while not perfect, there is nothing that breaks story immersion. Update stability according to the dates the chapters were uploaded was fairly good at the beginning, but became more and more unstable towards the end, starting with several chapters a day and ending with a chapter every couple of weeks. Excellent story. Shame there isn't a sequel. Plot makes sense and is consistent. Love how the MC is relatable and not too overpowered. Lots more character development than in most stories, but the development of side characters is pretty much non-existent, merely dropping them back into their cannon roles despite any changes made. The world is basically cannon. It's a good world, but very little was done to expand it, and then it was merely technique development and not the background. A good read.
I am a naruto fan so I read it right after seeing its title honestly I didn't have much hope for this novel but after reading it I gradually changed my views it was super duper good I loved it a lot i really like to thank the author for his/her hard word really thanks a lot author-nim I hope you will continue to write novels like this and hoping to see new novels from you