Reviews of NARUTO SAGA
NARUTO SAGA
bloodycake
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Really good fanfiction. And great potential i hope there will be many chapters. Yeah and ignore are negativ comments just try reading it yourself
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Dear author I absolutely love this story. I like the part that he was still going to the original story ish and then now completely deviating to it. Please please please!!! Release more chapters. I can’t help but be sad whenever I read one chapter and finish it. Also, ignore all the negative comments. They’re all bunch of spoiled creatures with nothing better to do but give negativities. Do not worry. Karma is a ***** and it will hunt them. As for you, maybe you’ll be reincarnated in Mary to world with a system too with a zanpakuto:):)
A very decent story it's nothing crazy but then again you know it's a fanfic, not much can be done that doesn't seem old when you're boring someone else's world. If anything my only gripe is that you kinda have had the guts to replace Naruto with a character I'm assuming is closely related to you or who you want to be, who's been given the opportunity to be the star of the show that everyone adores, but then again that's kinda of synonymous with the word fanfic.Ok honestly no b.s I just can't get over that you just swept over Naruto bro and Idk why.
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Well (whatever i say is for the author ) ...i can't say this is bad or good the most accurate would be if i said it is mediocre but its not mediocre for other readers but only me ... first the plot is overused since i have spent alot of time in fanfictions from here and other places system and naruto as the mc is an overused plot nonetheless...second is the writing quality which is kinda bad from the point of comfortable reading ... there is no Caps no commas no closure etc. (Fix this for more comfortable read). The chapters are too short maybe the shortest chapters i have ever read in this site ... this are most of the obvious flaws since i dont like to search deep into this novel but good try at making your first novel ..Good luck
To the author : This is by far one of the best naruto fanfic I've read on qidian and i have read nearly all of them. So congratulations and also i really liked how you limited the growth of (new) naruto by limiting his powerups most author just throw powerups to MC lile candy to children. For me it just kills all the fun of the story if the MC just gets everything on golden platter also please SHOW MORE TRAINING SCENES OF NARUTO AND HINATA I LOVE THOSE Ps its just a suggestion. To all the READERS give this a try i am sure it will not let you down its simply amazing the is even original about his powerups and (new) naruto is just a BADASS.
Over the past few days, I've given many bad reviews to authors who write fan-fiction in the Naruto Universe, this is because they tend to break the world in really horrible ways. That being said, this particular novel is one of the very few naruto fan-fictions that I enjoy. The world is not completely broken, some things change, some thought processes are different, some scenes are new, and some things happen more quickly, but they all follow a set routine of logic. This is something that I feel that other naruto fan-fictions lack. The writing quality is bad, incredibly horribly bad. Sometimes entire words are missing, sometimes names of people are missing, that being said, it is still readable because the story is that good. I can't write about the stability of updates because I binged this entire novel in about an hour or two. The story development is awesome, it goes along with the same flow as the original. The character design is a little shaky, but that might be because of the language barrier with our author and his grammar. The world background is exactly the same as the original, though the author is putting an extra "darkened" kind of twist onto it as a sub-plot. Expect to see the "darker side" of the ninja world in this novel, at least a little.
i would give it 5 stars i like how its unique you pretty much see a different perspective of what naruto could have been like if he didnt joke around as much or think more clearly especially with hinata lol but i gave it 4 stars because i just don't see enough description or depth of the story most of the time just feels like i am reading hard to explain like a monotonous dialogue and story
Hey man where are you.You have not finished even the 1st part according to cannon. There is lot of development into the story where are and why you are not writing any more. The problem of webnovel is that there are best fanfiction novel but not a complete one. No one completes there story I am really tired of this thing. Please continue your story.
Good novel and Very nice story development. Story focus on MC development completely and author doesn't OP his character at the same time he doesn't nerf him.. very balanced character and novel except few things. But most Naruto fanfic doesn't provide this much entertainment and thrill compare to other. Do not mind other criticism and do your best author San 👍