Reviews of NARUTO: Reborn as a Haruno

I might be an author but I'm not that shameless to put a 'lie' disguise as a review so I'm gonna put my honest thought in these Writing Quality: ☆☆☆☆ I lacked imagination so I lessen it a bit. I'm not that good at action so I'm trying my best, I'm also not good at romance as I am too young for that. I put 4 star cause I know I can improve more in the future Stability of Updates: ☆☆☆ I don't update much and my word count ain't that long. I only update if I don't feel too lazy or I'm bored. I only make it long when I saw compliments on the comment section ( so make sure to comment lots lol) Story Development: ☆☆☆☆☆ (I got a bit shameless here huh..) I will make sure to make plot of my own that is different from the cannon, if I made it boring then please just skip it if you don't like it and don't talk shit Character Design: ☆☆☆☆ I honestly put efforts here but she just so happen to look like Yerenica World Background:☆☆☆☆ I know lots of info about naruto but not that much, I put 4 star cause I will 'probably' reread the manga cause I'm too lazy to watch 500 episode of anime and I can't handle the cringy-ness of Naruto's word [though I still love it anyways] That's pretty much all for those who like this,, your compliment are making my heart flutter to be freaking honest so please keep reading [and give me more compliments lol] for those who hate this and trash talk this now and in the future.....**** off will ya'? losers,,, make your own fic thank you

The stability of updates is pretty good. There are some grammar mistakes but some I believe are intentional and the author’s 14 so I think it’s pretty decent even more since the author is writing purely for fun. The development is okay there are some plot holes but as the author has stated they don’t really care and are writing purely for fun and I personally like the fact he doesn’t really care. I sorta just like it in general because it’s a breath of fresh air compared to other naruto fanfics you can find on this website. Also I want to give power stones but it won’t work for me.

Now what we have here is a Naruto fanfic, but not just another fanfic that follows naruto or some spin off uchiha or ninja clan. What we have is a fanfic with a strong OC FEMALE lead, when was the last time you found a naruto fanfic with a female lead that is still updating on this platform.

Writing quality could use some improvement but content wise is very interesting and a fun read. I like this idea very much as it is fun to see some of my favourite characters in different yet familiar ways.

The book is great!!!Love the representation of characters as well!!Well this is just my opinion but i hope u slowly increase the chapter length and reduce the time skips !!!Thanks a lot for writing and hope u don't drop it !!

Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To be honest it's quite bad. There's some few typos there and there. Grammar is hard to read but it might be because Author is new. Anyway it's still nice to read and since I'm a nice guy I'm gonna leave a good review.

I'm being honest with my review, I actually like this fanfic and all but the author has its faults, makes quite a few typos, and does these random author comments half chapters, the protagonist doesn't seems to have much personality and the story content is OK, thus this is my honest opinion about this one~it's a good novel though thanks for writing it author

nice! a dense girl character! its so fun to read and exciting!! the interaction and emo gives more vibe to it! I recommend it!!!!!!!!!!!![img=update]

ehehe.... I like dis no dropping plz doe Spam: 🎓 ∠( ᐛ 」∠)_ _ ( :3 ⌒ﾞ ) _ ლ —(°◡°)- ლ Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyeysyesy

please don't drop! I've seen a ton of good Naruto fanfics dropped even though they're amazing, so keep up the good work .................

The stability of updates is pretty good. There are some grammar mistakes but some I believe are intentional and the author’s 14 so I think it’s pretty decent even more since the author is writing purely for fun. The development is okay there are some plot holes but as the author has stated they don’t really care and are writing purely for fun and I personally like the fact he doesn’t really care. I sorta just like it in general because it’s a breath of fresh air compared to other naruto fanfics you can find on this website. Also I want to give power stones but it won’t work for me. (I’m trying to grind exp and I’m to lazy to write)

Pretty good.