Reviews of Naruto: Otherworldly System!

At some point we should ask, "Should I?" instead of can I. I throw that out of the window because I just do it. Also I need crazy ideas. For example, Naruto getting the omnitrix while fighting Obi Wan Kenobi with pool noddles.

it messy and confusing with everything. filled with plot holes and random plot changes (for example naruto is supposed to be original naruto not a reincarnator or transmigrator but he know so much stuff about modern world like doomguy darksouls...)

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I think your base it on the title of "white demon fox" ???

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u just read through all the chapters and find dropped im like brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrruUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH why do i do this to myself

Keep up the good work all i ask of you is that you are NOT allowed to drop\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/\(♥ ͜ʖ♥)/

I'll be honest with you I don't particularly love the novel but I also don't hate it. Also peice of advice, remove the "original" in the title. I've seen like 4 novels taken down because of having that in their title. (Ex. Original Story of Fairy Tail, another is: Original Bleach system) don't quote me on the second one, the novel didn't last long enough to reach 10 chapters before being taken down so the title might be incorrect but for the 1st one I'm sure.

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