Reviews of Naruto Legends

Gotta 5 up your own novel right? Gotta get that clout.. Anyway this is the first novel I've ever tried to create so please give constructive criticism and I'll take it on board.

It's the first chapter and you have done a good job of setting out the characters in a believable way but I still think it could be improved along with it being quite short for a starter chapter. Other than that it looks promising I'll keep a look out on this one.