Reviews of Naruto: Journey of the strongest teacher
Naruto: Journey of the strongest teacher
Broxhitman1998
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The start of the story is good.. But sadly tho.. The author didnt give his mc more attention.. Not only he nerf him.. ( by giving rinnegan to mc, while he doesnt have chakra to support it ) He give more focus on naruto harem.. Rather than mc own lover.. He even ask if he should add another girl to naruto harem or not in ch 21 ( maybe, i forgot in which chapter, around that chapter in author thought chapter ).. Its getting irritating seeing that mc only there to support naruto.. Like making path way to naruto.. If it like this.. isnt it better to make naruto the mc instead.. and add OC to teach naruto.. Oh well.. hope the mc will trully become mc in later chapter.. It is interesting novel.. but its hard for me to continue it..
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the author focuses too much on naruto that he give naruto everything from the start he has the love of family 2 girls that love him strong ability completely deleted what makes him what he is in the original and what he does with Sasuke is more than stupid in my opinion he decided to take away his arrogance personality and leave him with pride once just for the sake of his plot take away his love interest Hinata and Karin he turns her into lesbian and now even he wants to make Sasuke into mc spy (more like a puppet) I know u hate Sasuke and love to naruto but man keep some original.
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when you start reading you will probably believe this story is interesting with tons of potential. unfortunately, as you read it goes down hill...not sure why you make an op mc just to nerf him. This is common with Chinese authors but they at least wait till chapter 800. This story seems more positive focused on Naruto while giving a few thoughts to the mc.
I think I should also make a Review to my own work, so... Thank you for those who are coming to ready my first Fan Fiction about Naruto. I am new to this so everything I write is coming from the part of the brain that focuses on imagination. Only after many time of re-reading and re-writing can I post a chapter which I deem good for my readers. That means I need time and that is why I can not post one chapter after another. Please don’t be scared by the first chapters. They are short, I know, as I did not expect how much a thousand words, or more, are. But those that are to come, are much better. So enjoy reading about Ishizu and how he changes the Naruto world. ENJOY.
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