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Reviews of Naruto and the Game of Thrones (COMPLETED)

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Naruto and the Game of Thrones (COMPLETED)

manny0101

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  • Writing Quality
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  • Character Design
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manny0101
manny0101Authormanny0101

So.. this is the autor's review... seems to be something of a trend on webnovel. Anyway, the update stability is trash so 1 star for that. I have put a lot of thought and effort in building the characters and have researched in an effort to improve my writing. Although, I do admit that I could have done better with the world background as the only source of my information was the tv series and some excerpts here and there. Overall, I believe that this fanfic is the best one out of the three that I have on my account. I don't count the shortest as it only has a few chapters. Hope you all enjoy reading it and have fun.. possibly as much as I had while writing it.

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Harvald
HarvaldLv5Harvald

This story is a waste of time Our MC Naruto is Op as **** and does hate everyone as much as they him but does absolutely nothing. He "cares" for civilian lifes in a talk with Daenerys, but plans on helping her stage a bloody civil war. Our Mc is not Naruto in anything that defines Naruto except for a bit of backstory. He has no aspirations, doesn't care about peace at all and is a freaking murdering edgelord. The only thing he has in common is that he is dumb. With his powers and the powersystem in GoT he could just assassinate his parents and psychotic brother and then rule as a just king. Problem solved. But the author seems to like Daenerys and twisted the whole story to get her to attempt for the throne and have Naruto follow along instead of making some sort of original plot. All in all our mc is more or less a passive edgelord observer with the name Naruto, who sometimes legally murders irrelevant people to get his edge off. I dropped the story ch12 and wish everyone else and the author to have fun with this story. I still recommend everyone to at least try the story for themselves and see if they like it. As everyone reads through their own lens and there may be good points that others might enjoy in the story.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

Naruto is hated by everyone...and you know unlike other ****...naruto hates everyone back...[those that ****ed with him],,,,but is kind to the innocent......there 5 stars here. Suggestion: Naruto one man army [i mean the whole stroy has been like that]...hinata...strong supporter of hinata x naruto.....no dany x naruto..we all know thats wrong...romance and fluff [give the poor MC some joy]..no tragic angsty separation ****. I do want cercie to regret what she has done but there will be no forgiveness..only death

akamegakill666
akamegakill666Lv13akamegakill666

It is really good please post more chapters.

Bamuel_Seckett
Bamuel_SeckettLv12Bamuel_Seckett

One of the most enjoyable fanfics so far. I just hope you will add good romance, cause that's the most enjoyable part for me. Good luck, hope you won't somehow ruin this one :D

Jccr
JccrLv4Jccr

At first I read the title and thought what a crap fan fiction, but for some reason I read the first chapter and then the second one and I thought that damn genius is the author. From what seemed like an idea crap for a story he turned it In an excellent read.

princxssce
princxssceLv2princxssce

I first read this on wattpad and absolutely loved it!! And I just had to read it again. This fan-fic is a must read 100%. I will say that it's a bit fast paced in my opinion, but other then that it's an amazing fan-fic.

Ghostlyyyy
GhostlyyyyLv4Ghostlyyyy

one of the best ff that I've read in a while, there are definitely mistakes here and there but that might just be because I still think that Naruto should've stayed single or something but all in all it's a masterpiece. I wish it had more chaps ya know.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]

Ghostan
GhostanLv12Ghostan

It hit all the main points. The story flowed. The whole thing was completed. All together this story is absolutely fantastic. Congratulations on the win

MasterBeast7016
MasterBeast7016Lv1MasterBeast7016

Brilliant work and I love the fact he doesn't think with his dick and has common sense that is quite rare these days. The MC sometimes just stands to the side and let things play out and doesn't just stick his nose into other people's business without good reason and honestly that's what kills most stories for me. It's honestly a breath of fresh air hope to see more chapters soon. Looking forward to it keep up the great work

Grey1902
Grey1902Lv6Grey1902

I've read a couple of his books and they are FANTASTIC truly a great read would definitely recommend reading this. He's not updating right now because of personal problems but if or when he does he'll have at least one faithful reader and I'm sure many more.

andrea_calvaruso
andrea_calvarusoLv11andrea_calvaruso

Reveal spoiler

Etiger789
Etiger789Lv14Etiger789

The moment I read the first three chapters I knew what addicts felt like. Wanting more but not being able to. The start is amazing and narutos charachter is so on point when it comes to likability. I hope this isent a short book and that at least there would be 100 or above chapters. P.s - I want him to be like a big brother to little wolf(ariya.) P.S.S - ILL BE HAPPY IF MC ENDS UP WITH ANY ONE OF THESE GIRLS. 1 Margaery Tyrell 2 Ygritte 3 Daenerys Targaryen 4 Melisandre 5 Ros 7 Missandei 6 own charachter ???

BigFan
BigFanLv13BigFan

So far this looks to be great story, seeing Naruto in a new world with this kind of personality and temperament and that too in Game of Thrones where he has a ton of advantages is really exciting. I hope the story continues and isn't dropped, I want to see where it is going.

Daoist922538
Daoist922538Lv3Daoist922538

Nothing spectacular, an ok read in a few hours time

Matt_W_0132
Matt_W_0132Lv3Matt_W_0132

Really enjoyed the book, well written, and not too lengthy, not necessary that you be well-versed in Naruto.

Humbuub
HumbuubLv4Humbuub

4-2-2-5-3, writing had minor mistskes sometimes but it's great overall. Story is a bit bland for my taste, just your usual OP MC walking along the park like it's nothing. No tension or whatsoever, just MC who seems to also know everything with no rhyme or reason. Updates are 5 stars, completed. World Backgroud is a bit farfetched for my taste. Character Design, it's just horrible.

HersheyHeist
HersheyHeistLv3HersheyHeist

It was a good story I don’t know about update stability because I read it after the story was completed. The pacing was a bit too fast. It could’ve been about 60 chapters with decent pacing. The stage just felt a little rushed but it was an amazing story all around.

Aegeonthedragon
AegeonthedragonLv4Aegeonthedragon

Fire that fanfic was fire he should make more

sadanandha
sadanandhaLv13sadanandha

it's an absolute good fiction plus a quick read and I am waiting for ur next story fanfiction [img=update][img=Loving it]