Naruto is hated by everyone...and you know unlike other ****...naruto hates everyone back...[those that ****ed with him],,,,but is kind to the innocent......there 5 stars here. Suggestion: Naruto one man army [i mean the whole stroy has been like that]...hinata...strong supporter of hinata x naruto.....no dany x naruto..we all know thats wrong...romance and fluff [give the poor MC some joy]..no tragic angsty separation ****. I do want cercie to regret what she has done but there will be no forgiveness..only death
Starts of really strong, until around chapter 7, where our MC decides to sit back and declare he will just be a spectator and helper of dany, i dropped it after that so im not sure if it gets better, but to me, thats just boring.. my guy went from mc to a damn spectator. Others may still enjoy this though, you may enjoy it! Leaving this review for peoole who feel the same, and will hopefully save them some time.
The moment I read the first three chapters I knew what addicts felt like. Wanting more but not being able to. The start is amazing and narutos charachter is so on point when it comes to likability. I hope this isent a short book and that at least there would be 100 or above chapters. P.s - I want him to be like a big brother to little wolf(ariya.) P.S.S - ILL BE HAPPY IF MC ENDS UP WITH ANY ONE OF THESE GIRLS. 1 Margaery Tyrell 2 Ygritte 3 Daenerys Targaryen 4 Melisandre 5 Ros 7 Missandei 6 own charachter ???
Well the writing quality is decent the story had a good premise but I feel jarring the way as the Mc despite being in his second life and at this point of time almost middle aged... He acts as a cringy and hormonal ****... The story has good points no doubt but the unnecessary drama, making things more difficult than they should be (considering the Mc background), too many scene that seems to re enact bad **** drama and most of all the absurd extreme contrasting attitudes of the Mc, made this story something that I couldn't consider my cup of tea... Neverthless ty to the author for allowing the readers to read his work for free... Good luck
WOW!! JUST WOW!! This is hidden gem! Really like OP MC, and the flow story is good. Uncovering what is hidden in valyria,..thats is new to me, realy interesting! Hope MC can use more magic and his ninjutsu&kinjutsu. Hopefully we got more chapter release! And thanks for writing this FF,.. O Mighty Author!
Love the story. Happy you’re back. Hope you get everything in your personal life handled well. Everyone’s life is crazy right now with this pandemic going on. As cliche as it sounds, Just don’t give up, keep pushing, there’s always a light at the end of the tunnel. And if you ever need someone to talk to I’m available my G. In fact I’m sure a lot of your readers, not just myself would be helpful. Keep your head Brodie. Much love to you and yours. Hope you update soon. Peace.