Reviews of Mystic?

looking back on the story I still cringe because of how bad I wrote back then. I might be released the story but I'm not sure. for contacts I wrote this back in high school. now I'm graduated in more educated with my writing style. still got problems but it's way better than this. I am currently releasing a series. It’s called Forsaken: The 10,000 Days of Dispair. The first chapter is currently out. Please check it out.