tempestpanda
Beautiful novel, op mc, system, shop with pills, equipment, vr (virtual reality for training), and upgrade room. Has a catgirl assistant, plot is great and not too tense and keeps you in wait for next chapter, updating stability is awesome (updated about one chapter every day). Only thing is chapters are really short but really doesn’t change how good the novel is, definitely should read if you are a fan of novels with shop owner op mc with system (or maybe if you just like cat girls :3)
Grammar and overall sentence structure, is quite poor and broken. The depth or well how well the characters are portrayed is just rubbish at best, the mc has no personality and the overall theme is forced . The background and world building is just terrible, theres no description on the surrounding or the store. its basically just stringed together dog shit. The Systrm and Power levels are just poorly planned. System wise.... the author tries to make it money grubbing and shameless but just comes off as a poor RIP off.
Honestly just read this novel because I was bored and I wasn't expecting much. But I must say wow, did this exceed my expectations. Although it is true that.grammar and writing could be polished the novel was entering throughout the whole 200+ chapters I have read so far. Plus it's completely free, compared to some novels in which writing quality is the same or worse and still put a pay wall. All in all definitely recommend, no paywall, intriguing story and although writing needs polishing definitely understandable and flows decently. P.S author I'm not sure if you have already but if not I would recommend you setting up a pattern if you're not gonna set up premium chapters, just add some benefits that come with supporting you and I'm sure you can make some befitting of your work!
after reading over 430 chapters i am ready to say i am disappointed with this story. I feel that the description of environment and characters is missing a lot, honestly until now I don't know what the protagonist looks like, hair color? eye color? skin color? what age? what's he like?. the personality of the MC is another shot in the foot is how he only cares about making money and not about getting stronger or improving and after a point the story gets boring without significant progression either in the personal aspect or in the world.
Good story, I like what I have seen so far. I'm excited about what will be happening when he starts expanding and more of the world and the grander story is revealed. Grammar is also improving steadily. In the first chapters, there were words missing or larger errors, now there is much less of such things, and the story flows better. I'm heartened to see the author steadily improving in quality. Good job!
Gotten about halfway through the current chapters; the book is good. Not suberb though, the grammar leaves a lot to be desired and im a bit put off by usage of punctuation. Nonetheless this is certainly worth a read. Kinda reminds me of Gourmet in Another World, but a lot more fast-paced. I also like the ‘level system’ used, makes the characters strength more easily defined.
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