Reviews of My throne
My throne
aleksandra_pano10
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Hi guys it's me the author of " My throne". This is my first time trying royal gener because usually i write stuff about mistery, thriller gener. I hope you like it and please write your reviews for things you like or not. Soon I'll post the second chapter while I'm working with others too Byee (•‿•)
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Not a bad story so far! The grammar needs a bit of fixing. The dialogue and description need a bit of work as well. Nothing too serious, but make it flow better and don't try to describe all their features at once. The names are also confusing as some are regular while others are Japanese and the setting seems to be placed in medieval times? While Ryoko ain't a bad character with great goals, I hope everything doesn't easily get handed to her as that's the feeling I'm getting at the moment. I mean it's your story, but I love it when I see a character struggle and not get everything handed to them because they are the lead. I mean you can still spoil them, as your characters are your babies, but be careful.
So far, I am loving this work. The author is really amazing and I couldn't help but share the mesmerizing ways this writer has captured my heart: 1. I love stories about royalties and especially mysteries so if you're a fan too, you should definitely hop in on the ride. 2. The character descriptions really amazes me. Great work from this author. 3. The writing style is just superb(if that's even a word lol) All in all, I am already in love with this book. You should try it too. Besides, the updating stability is well balanced if you as me.[img=update][img=recommend]
There are some grammatical errors here and there, but it's totally bearable and fine since the plot has so much to offer. It's been a long time since I read/saw a well-written female character with actual depth, goal and stakes. Not the usual 'She is strong because she is a Woman' kind of trick. So, a big bow to the author for that. And the mythos seems to be very interesting on this one, and my only request for the author is to get a grip on the grammar and pacing.😊
Throughout I found the story interesting and it kept me wanting to find out more about it, it's just not something that I would want to read, there were a few issues with it but I never got side tract and it was clearly painted in my head, so that's something I like about it. Hope you do well author and your story goes well, have a nice day.
I'm giving you a five-star review because... One, the introduction was capturing, two, your English is perfect... like 99.9% perfect. Third, the story background is great. I don't give out reviews but yours deserve more than one. Hoping to see more of your creativity. AND......PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!
A promise always be a promise (As I promised to make a 10 chapter review swap). But it turns out, the promise I wanted to make was my first and last mistake. I've stopped at the 2nd chapter on how much the mistakes the 1st two chapters are. Consists of: 1. Grammatical error 2. Useless info-dumping 3. Not much of punctuations 4. Story felt detached/rushed 5. And the chapters are too long (Maybe it's exceeding 2k words) If you make a chapter that contained these mistakes, then how can the reader comfortably read your story? Only if you had to fix these issues, I'll gladly changing my mind and reading your entire book. And maybe, my only suggestion is to using ProWritingAid. Because this grammar checker apps are specifically designed for a creative writing, like for the most novel authors.
A smoothly flowing series with a perfectly developing plot, characters, and world background. The stability of updates is also pretty good! The only thing that's bad is the few grammatical errors here and there, along with the lack of periods after many sentences. But those are all minor things. Other than that, it's a great story! I can't wait to see how it progresses!
I love reading about powerful, no-nonsense female characters so I really liked the main character here. The plot itself is promising. The character backgrounds are intriguing and the events in the story are interesting. I only had challenges with the writing style. I'm not used to it so it took me a while to properly appreciate the contents of the chapters I read. Still a good work. Keep writing!
