SKRZ
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
If you liked Ouran Highschool Host Club, you will certainly like this! Honestly, I didn't even like Ouran Highschool Host Club that much and I still am really enjoying this read. That should say a lot. The romantic tension is written super well, I loved the characters, and the protagonist is really relatable. I literally felt myself thinking something about the story, and then the next paragraph is the protagonist saying the exact same thing. This is a really fun romantic comedy with some intriguing mystery elements, some solid characters, and a delightful main love interest. Really enjoying it so far! I began reading it just as a review4review, but I legitimately enjoyed it so much I added it to my library and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
A very sweet cover page! The time spent at school is a time of searching for identity, first love, making friends and friendship that can survive the biggest storms, it is also an interesting topic to write about. Your story is nicely written so it's a pleasure to read it. Your characters are expressive and the plot is sapid. You're doing great!