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My Reincarnation as a Chicken *Deleted*
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My Reincarnation as a Chicken *Deleted*

Rados47

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What is My Reincarnation as a Chicken *Deleted*

My Reincarnation as a Chicken *Deleted* is a popular web novel written by the author Rados47, covering GENDER-BENDER, NON-HUMAN-MC, YURI, SYSTEM, REINCARNATION, HAREM, ACTION, WEAK-TO-STRONG, NON-HUMAN-FEMALE-LEAD, LIT-RPG, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 659.9K readers with an average rating of 4.51/5 and 37 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 0 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchLv4PancakesWitch

An enjoyable read that has a lot of the things i love! i dont mind a somewhat naive or dummy mc as long as it grows from its experiences. the game system is also interesting and simple enough, i wonder if tori will evolve into a phoenix?!

Rados47
Rados47AuthorRados47

Dont mind me, another shameless Author here to promote his book! Please give this book a read and rate it 5stars, cause If you are looking for comedy, come right over. If you are looking for smart but stupid MC, you've found him in Hinotori. If you wanna see one character go from weak to strong, I'm giving it to ya. If you want to see seemingly impossible to win battles and wars, Hehehe, it's all here. Join Akira/Hinotori as he ventures through a fantasy world after reincarnating as a chick, trying to figure his way through his way through the system, as well as making new friends and forging a powerful nation on his way.

UncrownedKing
UncrownedKingLv3UncrownedKing

Whoa? Deleted? What happened? The story was going great so far. At least I thought it was. I hope it's just a rewrite or something, it had so much potential.

Patch_Sama
Patch_SamaLv1Patch_Sama

I'll have to admit that I'm impressed. This is actual a good read, with a somewhat dumbass for an MC, but good work author-san. Also I realised that updates are quite stable. Please keep it up

Phodoodles
PhodoodlesLv1Phodoodles

This a highly amusing piece. If you're into reincarnation & comedy this would entertain you. I liked the the pacing of the story as the author knows when to tone down and also when to place humour on some chapters. I liked Karma's sass too. Sometimes Karma would just be chill and next thing, he/she/it would be a condescending companion lmao. There are some technical issues that I bothered me as I read this. First point, punctuation marks. During the initial chapters, I noticed some parts wherein the author didn't put any indications or marks for the character's monologues/thoughts. Although it was written mostly as a First person POV, the writting gets confusing as some of the narrative parts were typed out as dialogues and sometimes the dialogues are supposed to be internal thoughts. Second, lack of vigilance in proofreading. This got progressively worse past chapter 8, as I saw a lot of run-ons, slight typos, incorrect tenses and active/passive voice misuse. At first, it was bearable, but as I get to the mid-end part of the chapter, I'm seeing those errors pop up every now and then. One of the chapters even had a character saying the word "wonder" instead of the word "wonderful" (context of the dialogue was the character is describing a good idea.) Third, limited vocabulary pool. This by far made my eyes squint a lot. Sometimes I noticed that some words were inappropriately used- or more like the context of the word doesn't fit the scenario/dialogue. I can see the author trying to show diversity on his writing, but again, just by simply placing "synonyms" won't cut it. Another thing to note, I noticed that some of the expressions and dialogues get repetitive. (One chapter even had a paragraph where the word "deem" had been repeated 3-4 times) I do recommend that the author should be vigilant in proofreading and utilizing grammar checkers. I think with minor revisions, this story would shine better.

UnknownKuma
UnknownKumaLv3UnknownKuma

deleted.... it's all gone..... it was so good too.... why? at least explain to let us have ease of mind........ please..... what happened? why was it all thrown away...... did something happen? please.....

Miharu_Akimoto
Miharu_AkimotoLv2Miharu_Akimoto

I was really enjoying this so I hope it isnt gone permanently... Big O O F 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😩😩😭😩😩😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

TheNUT
TheNUTLv2TheNUT

why though ................................ ................................................. .................................................

reboot23
reboot23Lv2reboot23

WHYYYY!!!!!! this was one of the best novels i read and now its gone *sigh* it is what it is i guess.............................................

Keith_Brice
Keith_BriceLv3Keith_Brice

It is a fun read especially since the mc is funny at times. I also like how the author updates on a regular schedule. The world yge story takes place in has a rich back story

DaoistB9GvBJ
DaoistB9GvBJLv1DaoistB9GvBJ

Good read. I like the pacing and am interested in where this will go. Please keep it up and i hope to see more interesting characters. Don't worry about being a novice

Horatio_Prout
Horatio_ProutLv3Horatio_Prout

I think this is a great story but the way she is always in a weakened state against the big threat kind of takes away some of the development

Zero_two02
Zero_two02Lv2Zero_two02

I really like this story because I think the storyline is good. That's all I can say so thank you: ^_^ ~《☆☆☆☆☆》~ [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]

heather_samson
heather_samsonLv1heather_samson

I love the story really good and like how the mc is naive/dumb because she is in a new world and it helps her grow when she gets new information it's not that she is dumb in iw or int stat it's just she has no new common sense, and like the game system because it shows us her skills and how strong she is when ever there is a story with out a system in my opinion it's how to tell the mc skills and how strong they how most novels that I read like that u get to little to know information on their skills or strength at all or they just never include new abilities when they them untill later on and we had no idea, so that why I like when their is a system to help the mc grow and show their strength.

Otaku_Jimbae
Otaku_JimbaeLv1Otaku_Jimbae

kukukuu one of the very few novels I can't wait to read so many expectations surpassed, nice character development at least from where it's has reached no doubt it will continue to exceed my expectations😋😋

qwak_qwak
qwak_qwakLv2qwak_qwak

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the_lone_cat
the_lone_catLv2the_lone_cat

I love it. it is amazing. I just wish the author would release chapters more often... but this is an amazing book! Thanks author!

HentaiLover1
HentaiLover1Lv3HentaiLover1

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Apostle_of_cthulhu
Apostle_of_cthulhuLv3Apostle_of_cthulhu

Story is good well written its just the character is to my liking but I am gonna leave a 5 star because the book is good its juts not my thing will probably come back when there is a lot of chapters to speed read them. But yeah the story is good well written its just the main characters personality isnt to my liking (also author is realy nice so show them some love)

meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2meixiaolian

I found myself laughing of Akira's reaction or should i say tori-kun when he found himself as a chicken. He is kind of a dumbass like me 😂😂😂. This is the only fantasy that gave me a laugh because its quite humorous. Keep writing :)) I like it :))

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