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Iudiciis
IudiciisLv5Iudiciis

5 STARS FOR GREAT TRANSLATION QUALITY 100% CAN READ EVERYTHING NOT CONFUSING AT ALL. DEFINITELY DID NOT GIVE UP ON THE SECOND CHAPTER BECAUSE OF HORRIBLE TRANSLATION QUALITY, BECAUSE WHY WOULD I GIVE UP SUCH AMAZING WORKMANSHIP? *cough* Yeah, it's pretty bad, but the real reason for 5 stars is for the EFFORT! You could tell the translators put their heart and soul into their work because it made them into lifeless idiotic machines that churn out impossible-to-read chapters. So, 5 stars for effort!

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Vighnesh_93
Vighnesh_93Lv10Vighnesh_93

Such a pain in the ass to read. The translation work is not easy to read for people not having English as native language. And at the some spots you don't know who is speaking the sentence. I would rate rate 0 stars for translation quality if possible.

RedSnowman
RedSnowmanLv12RedSnowman

I read the title and thought id love it cuz im a sucked for storys like this but the translation is so broken its making me noxious. I cant follow whos talking or where the characters are. Ill keep this in my library and hope it gets fixed cuz its unreadable as it is.

Kisscraft
KisscraftLv5Kisscraft

Story is bland and COMPLETELY lacking in details. First chapter takes place on a "dark mountain path" that has lots of "darkness". No other details! Next two chapters take place... indoors? I think? And the plot is gonna be a "National Archery Competition" of some kind. No clue if it is a school or professional competition - or even what Nation it is! Why on earth did the translator decide this was worth the effort?

louisjacq
louisjacqLv15louisjacq

...Seriously? You dare to post a story where 99% of the people that reviewed it are unable to go past the second chapter? Make this novel coherent PLEASE. Thanks

Daoist_K
Daoist_KLv6Daoist_K

hard to read and understand translation.. story seems ok so far. be prepared for massive headache when reading this ..............................................

Venerable_spam
Venerable_spamLv6Venerable_spam

ok, if someone can figure out what's this story is about it would be helpfull for my review, so far i know there some fantasy in there, but nor sure how it got in there in the first place, also the MC seem to be an archer. beside that i cannot undertand this translation at all, i gave up on the 5 chapter.

KnightShade420
KnightShade420Lv13KnightShade420

This story is confusing and tiring. ....................................................................................................................................................

Gold_Coin
Gold_CoinLv5Gold_Coin

Trash, i read some 12 years old author's originals and it was way better written than this one. And it's not about translation it simply the novel is trash and so boring and that when u understand what's going on. It's so trash, am out of words to get this review's words count to 140. Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash.

Lord_of_Winter
Lord_of_WinterLv5Lord_of_Winter

Just absolute horse**** translation 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

NewCultivator
NewCultivatorLv6NewCultivator

Please Comment "F" for Translation Quality and bad editing! I pray for good quality and good editing for this poor soul. . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . .. . . . .. . .. . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .

Vervatim
VervatimLv15Vervatim

I've read this book up until chapter 20 and I'm sorry. There are plenty of good Korean translated novels better than this one. It's plot is inconsistent, the speech between characters is shoddy and overall very poor English.

dear_insanity
dear_insanityLv14dear_insanity

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....well, my thought evolve around that word when i read this book....it's confusing...the grammar...the wordings...the plots...the pharaghraphs...the conversations..the head and tail of the whole story...we need somebody that can translate well, and tell what the author want to convey...its a pity..really (๑-﹏-๑)

Arceus7
Arceus7Lv4Arceus7

My range is 20 chapters,.. I can't go beyond that.. I was still having a bit of hope after he reborn but,.. The higher the hope, the harder we fall.. I just feel sorry for the story that it gave me the urge to rewrite everything.. Other than that.. Let me leech some exp from this....... Exp exp exp expexpexpexp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp,...

DragonEmperors
DragonEmperorsLv12DragonEmperors

Very Confusing Story... Which and which of who is speaking and the alternate between perspective make it even more confusing As heck.. Wtf... So, I decided to drop this may be because the "English" far too advance for my english knowledge... As for the rating, for my less understanding, it lost a star and make it even more confusing... Another star lost. So there you go.. All three star for all category..

Wolfson
WolfsonLv5Wolfson

While the translation is bad, I don't want that to distract away from the fact that the story is also terrible. Horrible inconsistent and bland, it's hard to root for the mc as even he doesn't know what he's doing or why

ProfessionalWeeb
ProfessionalWeebLv11ProfessionalWeeb

WARNING!! only read this if you are confident that you can comprehend a language comparable to the Minecraft Enchanting Table's language OTHERWISE you need to turn of your brain so you don't get a headache reading this.

Raidur
RaidurLv5Raidur

do not read this LN unless you want to drop your IQ to join the special olympic and go beyond it. nothing make sense, there's no complete sentence or paragraph it feels like your reading a machine translated rewrite of an illiterate that package it in a light novel format. i'd give a zero star if i could.

cixan
cixanLv6cixan

awful translation, I tried to read but translation made me drop. and they say review should be more than 140 character😑 even two sentences should be enough...

Looneyes
LooneyesLv11Looneyes

even mtl is a lot better than this black magic chant!!! don't QI even do a quality check on their translator ? or they just give em a go as long as it's english no matter how broken it is ?