5 STARS FOR GREAT TRANSLATION QUALITY 100% CAN READ EVERYTHING NOT CONFUSING AT ALL. DEFINITELY DID NOT GIVE UP ON THE SECOND CHAPTER BECAUSE OF HORRIBLE TRANSLATION QUALITY, BECAUSE WHY WOULD I GIVE UP SUCH AMAZING WORKMANSHIP? *cough* Yeah, it's pretty bad, but the real reason for 5 stars is for the EFFORT! You could tell the translators put their heart and soul into their work because it made them into lifeless idiotic machines that churn out impossible-to-read chapters. So, 5 stars for effort!
Story is bland and COMPLETELY lacking in details. First chapter takes place on a "dark mountain path" that has lots of "darkness". No other details! Next two chapters take place... indoors? I think? And the plot is gonna be a "National Archery Competition" of some kind. No clue if it is a school or professional competition - or even what Nation it is! Why on earth did the translator decide this was worth the effort?
ok, if someone can figure out what's this story is about it would be helpfull for my review, so far i know there some fantasy in there, but nor sure how it got in there in the first place, also the MC seem to be an archer. beside that i cannot undertand this translation at all, i gave up on the 5 chapter.
Trash, i read some 12 years old author's originals and it was way better written than this one. And it's not about translation it simply the novel is trash and so boring and that when u understand what's going on. It's so trash, am out of words to get this review's words count to 140. Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash.
Just absolute horse**** translation 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Please Comment "F" for Translation Quality and bad editing! I pray for good quality and good editing for this poor soul. . . . . .. . . .. . .. . . .. . . . .. . .. . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....well, my thought evolve around that word when i read this book....it's confusing...the grammar...the wordings...the plots...the pharaghraphs...the conversations..the head and tail of the whole story...we need somebody that can translate well, and tell what the author want to convey...its a pity..really (๑-﹏-๑)
My range is 20 chapters,.. I can't go beyond that.. I was still having a bit of hope after he reborn but,.. The higher the hope, the harder we fall.. I just feel sorry for the story that it gave me the urge to rewrite everything.. Other than that.. Let me leech some exp from this....... Exp exp exp expexpexpexp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp,...
Very Confusing Story... Which and which of who is speaking and the alternate between perspective make it even more confusing As heck.. Wtf... So, I decided to drop this may be because the "English" far too advance for my english knowledge... As for the rating, for my less understanding, it lost a star and make it even more confusing... Another star lost. So there you go.. All three star for all category..
do not read this LN unless you want to drop your IQ to join the special olympic and go beyond it. nothing make sense, there's no complete sentence or paragraph it feels like your reading a machine translated rewrite of an illiterate that package it in a light novel format. i'd give a zero star if i could.