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My Own System

Author: TianTian
Eastern Fantasy
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この小説は削除されたか、ハイアタスにあります By coincidence, Red was trasmigrated to another world with a system that gaves him many mysterious things. He then found out later on that he will never be the same as before. In this world Aptitude and Innate talent matters but with a system what are these to him ? With the help of his own system he will become very strong that the heavens and earth will bow down before him without any hesitation. As easy as flipping his fingers and he will instantly transform into an unrivaled genious. Adventuring through the vast lands of this world, Ren found out that only by being mysterious will he become stronger. [Mysteriously killing a whole sect earned you a total of 1 000 000 000 mystery points]

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One_Thousand_Words
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All I can say that it is not easy to continue on writing your novel so it must be pretty hard on you to write. I'm also an author and I have the same problem as you, but I found a solution to mine that I think will be helpful to you. Make a plan first on how you want you story to develop ignore the details about the characters first and focused on this and everything will be alright.

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The story so far is good but I think you should post more updates, and you also need to ask for advice from other authors to have a better idea on how to write your story more. The characters are good while the background or the places need a little bit of work. But it is still a good novel keep up the good work.

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