The overall story is good. Although I do hope we get to see more characters except FL & ML. The one thing that I liked about this novel is that the FL is not dependent on ML as is the case in most romance novels, where they show FL as poor and unwilling. Keep it up👍
A great romance! You don't actually need to read the reviews just go read the novel! I promise you won't be disappointed by it! Writing quality is great! Stability of updates is spectacular but chapters are ver short in lenght... The story is developing nicely and the world background is very solid. The secondary characters are very well developed and have their own personalities and motivations. Some of them are even better than the two mc... this could be a problem in the future...author should try to fix this by developing the mc even more. Overall, a great story with compelling narrative! Good work Author!
This review reflects my ideas up until chapter 18. The story is quite similar to a few rich-people-hating-each-other-but-later-falling-in-love trope. I do admit it has it's own charms. Characters are a bit similar to stereotype and to one another, it's almost hard trying to distinguish between them. Yes they male and female protagonists hate each other but their world, career, disposition, and even circle of friends are quite similar. The story seems a bit fast-paced, but then again the chapters are quite short - so you have to wait for a bit (if you're up to date), or you blitz through the chapters (like me). It's almost as if quantity was one of the main selling points for this book. For the world background, the novel does describe it in detail. However it is limited to the world of the elite, so it feels redundant and expected at times. Overall it's really interesting with how the shortness of the chapters play into the novel. It almost leaves a lot to be filled in by you, the reader (which is not a bad idea at all).
I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR NOVEL VERY MUCH What a great story for the reader❤ I give you all 5 stars and 4 stars for the stability updates because i hope you can add more chapter, or make the chapters long or yeaah please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter 😁 u knw this story picks my interest. i liked it❤ I have a suggestion for you: i'm guessing you need to change your cover to illustration instead of using original photography. Usually webnovel fandoms, the cover illustration made me or the other readers pick up your story. It's more interesting and make the novel look unique.
Good writing quality and story development, thats my comment as a person who's not much into romance, I liked it and so far itz in my library. The Only problem is that chapters are too short.
Nice, bite size chapters. It has all the elements of typical rich-people-romance stories. But it's how you cook the food that makes it delicious, and stand out from other similar dishes. I do like the fact that the FL is a strong willed go-getter. Kind of sets this one apart from other works in the genre. All in all, a nice little read for those who dig these kinds of stories. Keep it up. P.S. Nice, cute cover you have there lol.
I was drawn into the world of Sofya and Arnav from the word go. A sucker for romance, I find their equation beautifully poised. Her independent character excites me unlike the cliched helpless females depicted otherwise. Its a reader's delight!
Amazing story Author.Best Romantic fiction I have read.😍 Writing skills are excellent and the story development is good. I enjoyed your book a lot 5 stars for you hehe. My best regards to you.😄
I am not the best fan of romance fiction. Your story is good. I didn't see any errors and so on. My only problem while reading is the chapters are too short. I hate short chapters more than waiting for long chapters. When I am in the mood to read romance fiction I will continue reading. Good Luck!
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The writing quality is good, just a couple grammar glitches here and there, the stability of updates deserves the five stars given how often the author churns them out but then again, the chapters are extremely short... Story development is good. Character design is fair, so far, they fit into the social elite stereotype that many novels of this kind have. But what I loved was that the female lead isn't a dependent spineless sap but instead a powerful woman who takes **** from no one. World background is well described, but it only focuses on the elites so far. Overall, a good story with short chapters to blitz through and a powerful female lead that deviates from the usual stereotype of how females are in these kind of novels.
FL is smart and rational, Ml is stubborn and cool. The story is good as you can see their first inreraction in the beginning with a lot drama going on. So far it's amusing, good job author. Get going with the story author 👍👍😎
Awesome story, m'lady!! Absolutely awesome!!! Keep going on!!! Yeehaw!! Btw, the chaps r too short but that is what romance is. Short and Sweet!! Keep up the good work!! Bot signing out😋
Hi author! The story is great. I love how strong and tough the female character is. Actually, I both love the two leads. Keep up the good work. Looking for more chapters😊
In general, a solid story, engaging twists and developments. However, in the beginning, I had a great deal of keeping track of which sister and which brother was which, since you have siblings on both sides with the same first letter in their names, Susan and Sofya, Arnav and Advay. It took a while to explain the past histories, so I wasn't as engaged then either. About 20 chapters in, things really seemed to pick up and come together.
The story is developing very well. You can go through it once more to fix a couple of grammatical mistakes... they aren't too obvious but I think it'd improve the overall reading experience... Good work
Ah~love this story. The chapters are short and sweet. Well sometimes not so sweet but u get the idea. The romance is well written and the writing style is awesome. I don't criticise much, so I'll end it here. To be honest, I didn't find anything to criticise. There were only some grammatical errors. Otherwise this book is pretty moe🌼🌼 for me
Wish My One and Only was like Arnav.... Am I like Sofya? Nah I am not that strong..... It's MUST READ for those who love romance... Many more chapters awaiting me so I am not gonna say anything more than "READ IT DON'T MISS OUT ON THIS AMAZING NOVEL OR YOU CAN ONLY REGRET LATER". Keep it up author.
The chapters are short, but you could consider the length to be unique to the story. There are a couple of grammar errors or typos here and there, but they don't distract from the story. As a romance novel, it certainly is nice compared to others. And, a strong female lead is a plus. Well, keep it up. I'm looking forward to more updates. >3</
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