Ru_ri
This is without one to offend someone or insult, is my most sincere criticism of the novel from my point of view. Well, the story has a good beginning, and very captivating but the development afterwards is very bad, in the end it is not understood if it wants to be realism or fantasy, the timelines or they make sense and the past of the mc is very confusing, first they say That he lived in the city after he lived in the country, the MC's mentality does not make sense, it is so changing and discordant with his past that it makes him angry and then his fat, first they say it was because of his hormones and then because of eating.
Mr ruri. I am a professional yandere reader. to be honest. I started anime and manga last year because of coronavirus. and then they became an addiction. until this year I realized I dont have much manga and anime left(at least the interesting ones.) then I thought of reading. I just searched yandere novel on google. and I found webnovel. this is a story of Feb. the first ever novel I read on webnovel was yours and this novel. at that moment I didn't have any comparison to tell if this novel was good but I knew it was very interesting. after 6 months I can say I have read most of the yandere novel present here and at webnovel. more than 100 novels. really. and I can proudly say that this novel can be still my favorite. the Sypnosis attracted me. the premise was amazing and story progression was great but. you just left. I was sad. I just wanted to say thank you because you were the one who bought me into reading novels. I don't know if you are going to continue or not but I will always be here. waiting for a new chapter. watching when will the chapter count go up to 35. I know that college life is hard but if you managed to get 5 minutes out then please upload again. thank you author. I will always remember you. hail... yandere... sect...
This novel is even Better that it seems, so please give it a try. with just ten chapters it can make be one of your favorites if you give it a try. Not only the start is firm and it couls be described as a roller coaster of pure bad luck. Until it develops from a start of despair to a Immensely great comedy-romance novel, full of Awesome Protagonist's development and rich side cast variety to have even More reasons to fall in love to this novel! But Thats not all, because the yanderes are the most Well writed and interesting beings in All the other storys i've read to date. The Plot, the System, the Comedy, the great and extremely entertaining growth of both the protagonist and the story And the Yanderes are the things for me that make this novel, solidly, one of my favorites in this plataform. Please, even if you have doubts, just read it, you won't regret it.
author san... please comeback.. everyone misses you already.. AUTHORRRRR!!! SANNNNNNNN!!!!! DONT GIVE UP YET!! EVERYONE'S WAITING FOR YOU !! YOUR FRIENDS!, YOUR FAMILY! YOUR READERS!!! AUTHOR SAAAAAAAAAAANN! I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW AND I BELIEVE. NO! WE BELIEVE YOU CAN MAKE IT!!!!!!!!!! DONTTTTTTTT GIVEEEEEEEEEEE UUPPPPPPPPP !!!
The book start rough atleast in my opinion about the mc but is you read atleast 10 chap i can asure that its great especially if you love yandere character that actually give a reason on how they fall in to that category My only request to the author us that i hoped the mc make the mc become mature as the novel goes by because im shock that i know more good things and bad things about the girls than the mc. I love the work hope the author will have more time for the novel and goodluck for youre school grades im also a student and reading this novel become my stress reliever ahhaha