Reviews of My Mini Planet
My Mini Planet
Poetic_Lord
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Hi guys, Poetic Lord here! I came here today to say, just wait half a year more, since I’m trying to get into med school next here, so I kind of need to study a lot. However, next year I will certainly return with My Little Planet!
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Well besides the endless typos misused words and failure to elaborate on everything... it could have been a good story... could is the main part here... the author cleary short cuts uses words that dont make sense and doesnt care if each chapter has numerous typos just for that alone i cant read any more also the main character treats the first female he meets as if shes a back alley whore up for bid to toss into bed... and she accepts it within 2 chapters... that just goes to show the mc is clearly another bs male lead and the female leads are going to be another dime a dollar hoe and hes going to collect them like rocks along a roadside aka as he walks hoes will toss their bodys at his .... another useless harem novel most likely... why cant for once a male lead based novel have him not be such a man whore
I can´t say anything to the stability of Updates or Story Development as of now, but the Story is really good. The Translation or writing is a bit bad tho. how instead of who when instead of went and many other mistakes at least in chapter 12. It´s not to the point where reading it becomes painful and the grammar is correct but it´s still annoying when you have to decrypt some sentences because the words aren´t right.
I do not think it would be convenient for them to appear to tell them that everything was a test, because they could develop hatred towards it. It would be nice if when you enter the god lesser cap, with the power of the laws, each god can create his universe within him, as in martial world, haci, when a god gets a planet, he puts it inside his universe, which it is inside your body, the more strong planets there are, galaxies, etc., the greater your combat power will be. It would also be interesting if the planets could evolve, through the war, when growers die, their energy merges with the planet, when it reaches a certain amount, the planet will evolve, increase its size, example, from planet to spirit, the The size of the planet increases by 1000, from spirit to earth, its size increases by 10,000, from earth to sky, its size increases by 100,000, and when a planet passes from heaven to divine, its size increases by 1000000 (one million). also when you increase your cultivation, from minor god to ascending god, you can have 2 universes within them, and the number increases, until you reach a titled god, where within you, you can have a whole multiverse, the law that you can perhaps create to be a titled god, maybe it is the law of the infinite ?, multiverse = infinite. the universe would be represented as a marble ?, as in super dragon ball in the palace of zeno-sama It would also be great if the shaman empire, destroy the other empires, conquering the entire universe, the MC flees with some servants( woman) loyal to him, his father dies, but the MC takes all the knowledge of his clan, for there is a day when be invincible, take revenge and destroy them.
