Darlene_Virginia
That was Good. In my collection now. First of all let me say this, I'm not good in romance works and especially love at first sight, I mean is that even a possible thing? For me if you kill someone that's reasonable but if you love someone from the first sight, I'm like why you did that? I always find romance confusing. Anyway So let's go with Synopsis, it's good, I mean look ..... "But here comes the twist, there are two heros and they look alike." There's twis and two heros here. Then there's kidnapping and going in search and underground. So even if I don't want to read it for romance, I have to read it for twists and turns as well as comedy, I didn't want to miss a unique story like this one. And I can say I didn't regret it, I'm still at chapter 12 but gonna read it more. Good Job author, I'm waiting for the new chapter, once I read all of it , so please keep writing.
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This isn't my usual story to read but it was a good read nonetheless. I liked the comedic interactions between the characters. The characters themselves are well written and I also liked how the background was setup. I also didn't see any spelling or grammar errors. Overall, good job. Keep up the good work!
Good stuff I say good stuff. Although I was confused at the first chapter, especially at the dog......... Anyways character design, and world development is good. I'm a person that pays attention to details sorry. And this two above just needs a little tweaks, I anit sayin where since it's your novel, not mine. Ill let you discover it yourself. Story development so far is very nice. Not too much that, not too much this, just right. Overall, WELL DONE.