My love between a vampire and wolf

This is my first time ever doing this so please give me some hints or what I should do so please help me please try to give a good reviews because this is the first time ever done this with you already know that and my heart is racing so please give me a little bit of good reviews and people can read this and thank you to everyone who is reading this it means a lot to me and I think everyone who is reading this and I am 11 years old so please give me a couple pointers if you're a fellow writer thank you. I ❤️you all