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Hello author here. I am here to adress the complainants regarding the chapter “questions and answers”. It was meant to be a non-chapter. essentially filler or a parody chapter. To those of you who are saying that you are dropping my book becuase of one extra chapter being not as good as the rest, i am not opposing you in anyway. I just want to say that My chapters will fluctuate a bit in quality and one chapter might be a bit rushed becuase i have to write 3k words almost everyday. all i am saying is that one chapter that might be a bit under standards. that is also excluding the fact that the chapter in question was an extra chap that wasnt scheduled. If you want an extreme quality long running story please Pick up an novel. And to those all who are supporting me, i thank you Guys for the critiscm and hope that you guys provide more constructive Criticism. Any ideas or also appreciated .
Writing 1: completely oof, there are just too many mistakes and the way author writes is incredible descriptive in a sense, he doesn't show what happened he just tell us it happened. It feels like a monologue where the main character talks about what happened. Story development 3: Average Character design 1: Everyone is one dimensional, and their personalities are awful, makes no sense how they don't seem to ever develop and instead keep getting worse Update stability 1: Twelve days without a new chapter already. World Background 1: If you consider info dumps as WB, then ignore my opinion on this one, if he was at least more... natural in how he presented all that information. Conclusion: 1.4
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Any good review is most likely a bit the story is cringe and is more like a really long monologue. Characters are 1 dime nsional and no world backround like we literally don’t know if hes going to the same school in canon or not. Like he literally says he doesn’t know and I don’ know if we will because I’ dropping early. I don’ know who the love interest is but seeing how he is basically grooming Gwen and Kai and the author outside of the story context made a harem reference so it looks like it’ might be a harem with grooming aspects.
Writing Quality:Do I need to point out how many mistakes you made?? //////////////////////////////////////////// Story Development: The story is way too rushed also half of your information is incorrect for exam Gwen had an actual older brother named Ken. ////////////////////////////////////////////// Character Design: Mediocre at best since there isn't enough information. //////////////////////////////////////////// World Background: Not enough information.