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Reviews of My life after being given a second chance.

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My life after being given a second chance.

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GoldBySilver
GoldBySilverLv1GoldBySilver

Too much grammatical errors, plot barely makes sense, mc character is inconsistent. Ignore the bot reviews. If you want to read something good then do not waste your time here.

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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3LunaKindred

Just like another tier 3 harem fics, the plot is cliche and the mc development is so stupid. You make his past is yakuza but you write it like 16 yo boy with hero syndrome, his alignment should be neutral, why you make him like beta mc, it should be black-white mc...

assad1830
assad1830Lv6assad1830

i want to continue but i can't. I 'm losing my brain 🧠 cells reading this fic. .................................................................

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Author writes a "cruel" past for the main character, then when the story begins, everything loses meaning. The main character acts, thinks and talks like a 9-year-old brat with a stupid hero complex. MC is beta, simp, cuckold man.

Pacifist_Warrior
Pacifist_WarriorLv4Pacifist_Warrior

~Ahem you got me author first by dxd pic on cover now...... ...Kaede .....Lexia.....Celial.....Shuri ...'cough' Akeno 'cough' no I'm talking about mature version (no pedo) I have high hopes for you author in this novel (waiting for segs 'cough')~

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5akasuna123

main character lies for no reason. . ..... ... . ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...... ........... .. ... ..... . ..... .. .... ..... ... ....

IamKingOfFreedom
IamKingOfFreedomLv1IamKingOfFreedom

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_MICHAEL_SAINT
_MICHAEL_SAINTLv4_MICHAEL_SAINT

i m sure the author is a 13 yr old high on hormones and caffeine and wrote this while smoking weed and jerking off cuz this is a abomination mate

primordialzero
primordialzeroLv2primordialzero

The MC is very naive, it doesn't seem like he's done bad things in his past life and that already damages the foundation of the fic because the authors are like that, they start well but most start to put stupid things that damage the fic in the tags, he says system but he system where is it?

Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14Uncle_Roger_main

straight trash in a book form. grammar is awful and the story just hops all over the place. no character growth or background. don't waste your time.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

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teo331
teo331Lv4teo331

Interesting premise but badly executed. The translation is horrible even for a machine. The characters are flat and not well developed even after 40 chapters.

LazyPec
LazyPecLv4LazyPec

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DarkConquerorPR
DarkConquerorPRLv13DarkConquerorPR

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EvilDarkDemonLord
EvilDarkDemonLordLv4EvilDarkDemonLord

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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

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G0d_4174
G0d_4174Lv13G0d_4174

Just the first four chapters was amazing I expect a lot of good things to come from this book. Also I think you should focus on more of uploading more chapters per day if you’re able to do it that is.

Ekhemos
EkhemosLv13Ekhemos

at the start its good but later grammar gets worse and plot starts to lose its meaning

FrostKing5678
FrostKing5678Lv11FrostKing5678

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ChaosDragon
ChaosDragonLv4ChaosDragon

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