Imaan00
Okay, so first of all, this is the sweetest book I've read in ages! I am just so tired of the male lead being all bad and just an overall jerk. I am hoping Knight remains to be a kind . . . I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO CALL HIM! He's so protective of Alana and would literally do anything for her! Who wouldn't like him? I am hoping for more updates for this lovely book π©π₯° The writing style has also made me entranced and the story title is so sweet (: The cover shows exactly how I imagined Knight in my head when I read the details about him which shows how well the author has explained it!
Writing Quality: Pretty fluid writing with a strong emphasis on emotion and responses, which I find to be extremely fitting for a romance story 5/5 Stability of Updates: Just going to assume ahahha ^-^ 5/5 Story Development: This was the only category I gave a 4 for, and my reasoning was for the jumps between time. Specifying with then and now and their ages was helpful for me to remind me whether it was in the present or past, but personally, it made it more difficult to immerse in their present day relationship. For me, if you instead presented it directly as a flashback in which Alana was like back when.... then I think it would have flowed a bit better (but take what I said with a grain of salt ^-^) 4/5 Character Design: I appreciate how you added fear and uncertainty so that the story was more realistic 5/5 World Background: Pretty standard for a CEO romance 5/5
Interesting plot author. The switch between past and present is done well. Your have brought out the emotions of the MC with good descriptions.π Though it is still early to tell the character development and pace since it's only 6 ch**, I like Knight. The way he suffered on MC's behalf was truly tragic..π£ Synopsis is also well written. Overall it's intriguing as to who is Steve and what past they share. Waiting for more! βΊοΈ Keep it up! π And good luck.
Okay... You are not supposed to fall in love with your best friend. She did.... I faced the same situation some years ago and I choose not to fall in love with my best friend. He knows me too well and so do I! Walking in the rain with him and we were both wet, it didn't move him at all. π€£π€£ So... Thanks, Author. You bring the memory back. Keep writing... please... π
Not my cup of tea but I do liked the story, coz I couldn't stop myself from reading more. Author did a good job in description part. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. This book straight goes to into my library π I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.
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I love how you tell the story and introduced the 2 main characters (I'm a hopeless romantic) found some grammatical errors but nothing big that distracts me from the enjoyable read. I read all 3 chapters, I would be pissed if he forgot about her though, the guy might not be as good as I thought? XD anyways awaiting future chapters!
I felt a breath of fresh air after reading a few chapters into the book. Quite different from all the other books i ve read so far and ongoing too. The characters, setting and the geography is different from my currently books in the library. Liking it so far and I hope author won't drop it in between. Keep it up n best of luck. I'll certainly review it again also after a few tens of chapters π