Reviews of My Journey of Hunter x Hunter
My Journey of Hunter x Hunter
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Although the story starts off slow and not very eventful, it does get better in some parts. However, you could binge this story in a day. Plot: The MC is a guy who got sucked into a TV and landed into the world of Hunter x Hunter. Now, starting from the Hunter Exam, he must make his way around the story. Edit: There is a plateu on the gender of the MC in the first few chapters because I didn't know if I should make the MC a girl or boy but now it stands that he's male. Thank you for all those who read this story, as flawed as it may be. Please know that I didn't expect this fanfiction to get so many views and so I'm basically writing anything down. However, if you like stories with a good plot and writing structure, it's better if you read my other stories: Fanfiction: Reincarnated to the God Tier: MHA Fanfiction Novels: Oblivious Ties, Click! & The Power of Blood (WSA)
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so the chapters are barely 200 words long and one chapter was even written like this: - he kills them - gets rewarded - goes home to sleep - wakes up and get's assassinated etc. like tf are you even doing author that's just a summarization. and while he says it gets better this stuff ain't readable. if you want people to actually read your story you should re write the first few chapters cus this just discourages people from continuing
The first chapters were mediocre at best, but that changed over time and the story became better. The detailed explanation improved, and it was very illustrative and easy to read without any plot holes. But... there is one thing that this story lacks, and that's the author's creativity. There were some fillers here and there, but creativity in one's work is still a necessary element. The best part is that the characteristics of several personages in this story are very well portrayed, expecially Killua's.
