I'm still classified as an ******* writer. But I will give my honest assessment. This assessment is based on the first 5 chapters.
First: There are already few clues as to who the MC is but it's still not clear where the MC is. Need a little extra explanation about the world he is in, at least where he is in the current environment. The first 5 chapters still make me wonder, where this MC is located.
Second: Even after 5 chapters, there are still too many filling paragraphs. The first 2 chapters are still fine, those 2 chapters are usually used to explain the world he is in. However this is an online novel, the reader can move as easily as turning the palm of the hand. Therefore the initial chapter is very important to provide stimulation for the reader.
Third: It is still unclear in the future what Mc wants to be. What is the purpose? what is the end? At the very least give a few pointers as to what must be achieved by the MC. There is indeed a hint of prophecy, but it is still blurry.
fourth: in my opinion, the synopsis is too simple. Much better if you make a little extra explanation. Where will this story go? what is found at the end of the story. There is nothing wrong if give a little spoiler about this story. At the very least it can tempt the reader to get started.
These are all honest from my point of view. After sharing here and there with some of my fellow writers. Read a little bit of literature, read stories, read people's comments on famous novels etc.
My grammar is not good, hope you can understand what I said.