Titu_Thatal
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I have read through chp 25, and I hate the husband-professor-boss. He is cruel & abusive to the FL, uses threats to her mother & brother to force her to stay, forces himself on her when he wants, berates her publically while papering over the problem privately. For example, she is late to class (5 min) because her bicycle crashed (why couldn't her husband give her a ride to school?), so he throws her out of class and refuses to accept her work, but the next day he calls her to his office and has her clandestinely sign the list of people who turned in the assignment. He is arbitrarily abusive & caring, which is far harder to deal with.
This is absolutely a great and interesting plot, but the flashback is so long it should just be the first part of the book instead of a flashback. An editor would do a lot of good as well; many people have offered to edit the story in the comments I saw. The story is understandable, but would be more enjoyable and easier to read if it was looked over by another person who might also be able to help the author improve their English for the future. Finally, there really hasn't been much character development or depth to the characters at all. The ML is cold and unlikeable, the FL is suppose to be 18 but seems to have the mentality of a 12 year old, and the FL's mother doesn't really seem to care for the FL as much as her son. I might come back to this in the future, but I'll be dropping it for now. I do like the general plot but the story overall could use some work in my opinion. Good luck with your writing!
Here's my honest review.. At first I was like yeah the title is Interesting and all lets check it out. Then when I read I was very emotional then I was like I don't really like emotional stories but with the authors thought I started thinking other way and bro it's an awesome novel I got hooked to it so hard.. I assure you that you will also get hooked to it hard... Hope to join authors discord server..
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Another self abused FL I am looking for a FL that would fight back but itโs disappoint me another self proclaimed love ML I am looking for FL that can give up her love and fight for herself instead just hoping for the best The novel itself is good The quality and quantity isnโt the best I would give 4.5 or higher if the chapter is longer I want more updates I want to see what would the FL choose after she is totally broken The ending would the same but I really the author can give the FL the justice she need for endure for so long The ML should have a taste of his own medicine When the FL is with another man and acting the same way how he is acting now Make him feel the same pain she went though
at first i like the content but there is so many character and other love stories in this novel. i see the imagination of the writer but im not that interested in the other character except the boss and his wife. i like the 1st chapter where there is a love triangle. but the story seems to ramble. sorry but i love your imagination hope u end it well[img=update]
if you want to mentally torture yourself then go ahead and read it . the ML is a psychopath . the FL , I can't even say she is weak . it's just she doesn't have self-respect . in the name of love and saving the loved ones from some ridiculous danger, the ML did inhuman treatment to the FL and the FL forgave him for how much he 'loved' her . when you feel like losing your mind you are free to read this . these are just my point of view . no offense to anyone .