Read this..

I just want to talk about the MC...

Some people told me that the MC is acting like a kid...He is childish and delusional... and all in between...

The reason is...He is a fucking child...

If you read the synopsis.. I said 'Bakugo is a reincarnate?'...With a '?'...

So yeah...I admit I should write the synopsis better..

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Basically.. the soul of someone from our world entered the body of Bakugo when he was in a womb..His soul and Bakugo's soul fused and breed something new..

A new soul, a new entity...No matter how old he was...he's a newborn now..

Like how no matter how old the ingredients you used..the cake you bake will be new and fresh...same concept..

He just had early awareness.. but his past experience is just like a movie for him..those experience were his but at the same time not..

Hope that makes sense...

And because of the soul fusion..he got new soul based powers and his quirk adapted to it..

Understood

Who am I kidding?? You're probably more confused..

Holy shit...I am really bad at this...

Haa...whatever..just use your experience on all those trashy fanfics you read and make something up for you to understand..something along the lines of what I just said...

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Oh and someone told me that my fanfic is annoying...and even if it gets better later he would drop..he also told me that a book's beginning should be a hooker..making the reader want to read more but I seem to do the opposite...

Thanks for the constructive criticism...

I agree the beginning of my book is kinda annoying for some people...I am a new writer, I was trying to get comfortable writing and it was all new waters for me...I am improving though..so I could now see many mistake I made in the beginning..

I was just making it up as I wrote...Trying to hook in the reader with some silly jokes and stuff since I was really bad at writing...

But I won't delete it...I like it that way...I may see many mistakes and stuff I could improve but I was trying my very best back then too..It would be an insult for the past me...

Anyways....read the story please!!!

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