Ok, first thing first, this story is about a boy who was a top scientist who created antimatter bombs. Due to several people, the blueprints spread and of course, WWIII happened. In the end, he dies and that’s when he gets reborn in mha with the power of generator Rex.
Writing Quality: 4 Stars
Good, flowing sentences with limited grammar errors. There are, however, spelling mistakes every now and then in each chapter, but readers would be able to know what author is trying to spell.
Not too long sentences, not too short sentences, good length for reading leisurely. Vocabulary is not very diverse, but it’s good enough so that it is not too repetitive.
Updating Stability: 5 Stars
I’m judging this based on his other fanfic (boring life in....). Author posts daily at 12pm GMT+8, so if this fic follows the same schedule in the future, it’s a five star.
Story Development: 5 Stars
Good background (both old and new world). Not one sentence description. Not touch and go. Actually have flow. Mc isn’t OP from beginning, though he has the potential to be. His mother on the other hand, can fight with All Might in her armour, so yeah...
It’s currently a slow to medium paced development, so if you like fast paced developments this will not be for you.
Character Design: 4 Stars
The characters are ‘alive’ and not ‘dead’, automatically passes 3 stars. The father is henpecked, the mother is number two hero, his older brother is a quirkless scientist, each with their own unique personality (brother is still not explicitly introduced yet so this will have to wait).
MC is a pervert(??), not too sure how to describe it but he likes cockblocking his father at night so that his parents can’t have ***.
The only reason why this is not 5 star is because the mc has like two very distinct personalities (which I don’t think match very well, but others might differ). The first is his ‘war torn’ personality, aggressive, untrustful due to leak of blueprints. He also blames himself for causing the war because he desgined the bombs, causing him to feel inferior of some sorts.
The other is the newer personality which he gets after being reborned. He likes his family, and feel much more confident with them, but he is also a realist that doesn’t just take things at face value.
Not that I really hate it, but author can’t make those two personalities ‘flow’ or ‘link’ together. His personality changes abruptly, so...
World Background: 5 Stars
This is a fanfic, the original world background is literally spelt out for you, so unless author decides to add or mix and match worlds horribly, this will always be a five star.
Overall Rating: 4.6 Stars
Good read for leisure. If you are looking for something serious might not be for you. If you like generator rex, do come and read this!
