Reviews of My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer
My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer
NandoFalske
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Just dropping by to give every author the classic 5 stars! This is my first time writing a big, long novel, so I do my best to plan the script, the characters, the consequences of the MC's actions, and everything else. I hope you enjoy it! I am not a Native English speaker. So, of course you will find some grammatical errors and when you spot one, let me know through the comments tool and as soon as possible I will correct it. Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions. Enjoy your reading!
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After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel free to do a review: Writing Quality - Despite making mistakes in some things that I think are normal, the author manages to develop the paragraphs very well, always connecting them in a way that makes us read quickly and fluidly. Stability of Updates - Very good! Chapters every day is the minimum I ask to give 5 stars. Story Development - For now? Perfect. It managed to insert many good mysteries and is also not making the script predictable, because it is always breaking a clichΓ© here and there. Character Design - Very good. Although I miss the descriptions of the characters' clothes, it contributes to the fluidity I commented on in the first topic. The characters' personalities also pleased me, because humanity shines through. World Background - It hasn't developed the whole world yet, but the cities it has developed seem really cool and alive. A great novel, with a very promising future. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything develops and maintains quality.
Look, I have two points to highlight in my review. First - The pace is very good, especially at the beginning. Nothing seems to get dragged and when I think the good parts are over, the story amends into another very good flow. Second - The syntax is not the best I've ever read, but it still remains good for them and well understood. Finally, I recommend you read this work this, because it is already very good, and I look forward to seeing how it will be in the future when you have more fame.
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So after reading for some time I feel like it's time to give my two cents. I will not write a long review just some basic information this time, The story is good and somehow unique but you will find the action scenes lacking. Character designs is well done in my opinion. I find the MC cute. World background is a fantasy medieval setting that gives you a typical isekai feeling, It's not too bad with adventurers and stuff like taverns and etc, Update stability is good. Now as for the writing quality. Despite the people who previously praised it. Its actually bad to be honest. I spotted several grammatical mistakes and nonsense sentences. Aside from this, I will continue this story as it is still readable and I like it, however I can see why it's not popular as well.
Reached the end of free chapters so I'd figure I'd comment on how it went. This novel is written decently well, and the story it leads is interesting and fulfilling. The only thing that could help this novel a bit more would be an increase to the world development and background. Other than that, its a good novel worth checking out.
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this review is more of a question to people who have read the story, from what I understand from the synopsis the mc is an artist/thief who was created from magic like a homunculus and is strong enough to rival the gods of this world. what it doesn't mention are the girlfriend the story is named after, what types of godly powers our mc has or why a magic created being decided to become a thief. the synopsis seems so gibberish that i can't bring myself to commit time to the novel to find out if the author put any more effort in on that end so if someone can give me a better synopsis then I'll come back and try reading it.