Ying Yixin
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The translation is mediocre at best and definitely taken from an MTL, but the story is still good. If you can take the constant headache that comes with reading sloppy proofreading and ignore your grammatical pet peeve, then give this novel a chance. It's a story with a great twist on an old classic. The male protagonist goes through rebirth for the purpose of getting his happy ending. The rebirth brings about a butterfly effect that unknowingly affects the female protagonist who becomes a lucky koi and also replaces her evil closest family with three transmigrators of different backgrounds that suddenly have to learn to become a family, while at the same time wanting to make it big through farming, inventions, and business. Lots of love and lots of laughs.
Nice synopsis But execution of it is only ok First 20 chapters just building who the family are and who the characters are, but not very in depth. There’s transmigation, spoiling, and farming at tags. So far not very boring, but not super exciting either I can see the transmigation and spoiling part and it’s predictable where this will go. But so far the execution of it is only ok. But the farming tag is the variable and hopefully it’ll give a platform for the transmigation and spoiling tags to shine. Readable Probably will read the first 20 chapters and feel like the synopsis gave more information. This is probably the reason why there’s so little reviews because people after reading want to read more before making a judgement. So far I give it a meh for good plot, but the execution is only ok. I think it’s because the ppiny of views switch too much and do allow a character to be built before going to the next one.
Overall, I would say that this is one of my favorite stories. The inky setback is the translation. Wrong pronouns, interchanging of names, repeating paragraphs...you eventually need to dicipher what's happening to whom in the story. But, aside from that, I like the story overall. It got a bit boring nearing the end but the author was able to squeeze in a heartwrenching scene, then quickly, but completely, ends the story. Reading this book was like riding a roller coaster. There is first a long and high build up, then the exciting downride complete with the loop the loop, then a plateau, followed by a small hill like excitement then comes to an abrupt halt. So despite the grammar error, I enjoyed the book till the end. :)
Did it mean that "All my family are transmigrator except me" with a slice of reborn novel male protagonist as a side dish... I think it will going to be interesting. (The most I see in another novel is transmigration from Xianxia with her so called enemy as neighbors son, plus big bro as transmigrator...) hopefully this novel will get picked