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MY DEMON SYSTEM: IMMORTAL WARS

Author: Dark_knight234
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Silent_soldier1
Silent_soldier1Lv3

Really promising I just hope we get to focus on the schools/academy’s for a long time cos it’s usually my favourite part of these type of novels

Ebube_Uzoma
Ebube_UzomaLv3

I really like this book. There's less errors, and fantastic literary appreciation. Honestly I can't wait till next update. keep up the flames author

shentiments
shentimentsLv3

The story is good, so it's not surprising that so many people are reading it. Klaus is too young, and he has lost everything, even his innocence. I like the setting and how the character is portrayed and explained. The story's characters are fascinating, and every chapter keeps me reading. Must Read! Keep updating!

DaoistHm2HHB
DaoistHm2HHBLv1

Reveal spoiler

Baka_asta_
Baka_asta_Lv13

after reading 30 chaps I was totally frustrated don't really like a plot where the mc can't even do what he wants the system is controlling it and then the fking mc got killed his family now dropping it if the parents are revived or something then plz drop a reply will start reading it again.

Dark_knight234
Dark_knight234Author

Hey guys. Author here. Thanks for your support so far really appreciate. if we do win the contest or come out as one of the top 3 then there'll be steady updates and stay tuned as we move on. 2 chapters shall be released on weekends 😊😊👌🏾💯🔥

Tom_Dane
Tom_DaneLv1

Niceeeee This has a touch of Jks in it. not bad for a sstart. actuallly ... ....most books flop at the start. this is a sign for greater things .and I understand this is your third Book correct?. keep it up

lusit_Stinner
lusit_StinnerLv1

Just finished reading it. great stuff going on. pretty cool how the world ended up having a third war. crazy Concept, hoping your book isn't overlooked.

Solomon_Johnson_0049
Solomon_Johnson_0049Lv1

crazy stuff going on here. great start imo the suspense going on from the start is just amazing. I'm pretty sure this is going to be a classic

DaoistCWlQTX
DaoistCWlQTXLv2

Goodgoodfood has the most t smell ever oxic

Favour_Ukiri
Favour_UkiriLv1

I love this novel, keep it up guys......i like the way the mc is not some lowly weakling. Moreover plz try to update frequently the updates are slow

Eternal_bunny
Eternal_bunnyLv3

So far, so good. 👌👌 There are some slight errors however, the plot is fascinating and l love the concept. The characters are as well interesting and I am looking forward more to it. keep up the good work author. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

moved_44
moved_44Lv1

The book is great... The story line is amazing and the characters are interesting.... The Author really did a great job in writing the book.

Isabelle_Kenny
Isabelle_KennyLv1

its a good book I really love the plot and setting .I really recommend this book its amazing . The author is really doing a great job please don't skip this book

Frostbite_
Frostbite_Lv1

Wow. This is wow. It kept me glued to my screen. Author did a good job. The plot, grammar and everything is so wonderful. Can't wait for more updates

Adesua_Fayokemi
Adesua_FayokemiLv3

Nice storyline, looking forward to the story as it unfold gradually 🛌💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃kudos Author

Daoist997626
Daoist997626Lv11

Its a really promising start!!!! Im your fan from an online group by the way thanks for creating this wonderful novel i hope it continues!!!

John_Ken_1151
John_Ken_1151Lv1

Great start. like the concept of the story. world building per say can be improved upon. love the dialogue and all that goes on. looking forward to enjoying this one

Covetousness
CovetousnessLv2

bad novel paragraph way too big lot of error pain to read hard to know what is happening .....................................................................

ckdeath88
ckdeath88Lv15

author dose and amazing job at pulling you into a new world. grammar is good and story doesn't feel rushed or sloppy. I really hope more people actually co.e and read this one.