My class is chosen

Nate was a regular kid he had a small group of friends and everything was fine until one school day a white light took him and his classmates away to a replica of there class room in the front of the classroom sat a small white and black bear with a red eye “hello students today is your lucky day today you have been chosen” Hey guys author here I’m new to this so I’d like some constructive criticism hope you enjoy And I also update whenever I want