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Reviews of Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as Rudeus's older twin brother

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Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as Rudeus's older twin brother

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jeanpierregerardo
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Author, if you read my comment, consider also: -Eris Greyrat. -Sylphiette Greyrat. -Aisha Greyrat. -Ariel Anemoi Asura. etc. ..............

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Roxy_Greyrat21
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Author here...... Hope you enjoy.....................................................................................................................................................................................

The_Hacker
The_HackerLv1The_Hacker

Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks.

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5Hollysummoapocaly

Me gusta lo que has hecho, y también estoy de-acuerno en que hay muchas cosas de la novela original que no me gustaron, principalmente el MC que parecía un niño malcriado, pero de los estúpidos no adorable. Seria bueno que no limites la cantidad de Mana que posee o almeno del nivel de su hermano y solo sea el nivel de la magia que puede lanzar, que seria el intermedio era?. Seria como no poder disparar una Bazuca pero tener Mágnum con disparos casi ilimitados. me ago entender? . . Ps: Agrega a la rubia elfa, Has de ella tu sirvienta o lo que demandes, me dejo un mal sabor de boca cuando no le iso nada. Al igual que con la sexy morena gata del parche en el ojo. Seguí así.

ghsandrade
ghsandradeLv6ghsandrade

Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks. I am copy the other Man in the Works. But is my feel about the story.

ghsandrade
ghsandradeLv6ghsandrade

the refresh rate is very slow. I'm not complaining. this is really the only bad point I think. i hope you keep up the good work. thanks for the chapter.

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5Hollysummoapocaly

No me había dado cuenta que no había dejado una reseña. Mal de mi parte. Me pregunto, por que no hay muchos fanfic de esta novela. El MC Original era un dolor en los bajos. Y un MC que lo reemplace sería genial, o en este caso, su hermano. Lo único que me molesta, es lo lento que bajan capítulos. Pero lo demás, recomendado.

Haku_Cianci
Haku_CianciLv4Haku_Cianci

Please next 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙇🙇i like this story, membaca saat sedang santai menenangkan, perkembangannya tidak terlalu mengejar kekuatan seperti dicerita lainnya, i like this 😍😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰🥰😍😍🥰🥰😍

otankay
otankayLv11otankay

la lei solo porque habia buenasreseñas, es faltal, los capitulos solo se sentran en los primeros del anime, imagina ver el anime con un personaje extra nada relevante ni importante. asi es esto. es una perdida de tiempo

Vontrujillo
VontrujilloLv1Vontrujillo

Me gusta el personaje creado para este fanfic pese a que el propia autor resalta que su protagonista tiene problemas de personalidad este se siente mas vivo mas humano a diferencia de otros que se siente como cascarones vacíos que pueden hacer todo y resolver los problemas con el mínimo esfuerzo por eso este me gusta

Haku_Cianci
Haku_CianciLv4Haku_Cianci

🤣👍😂👍🤣🤩😍🤣🤩🤣😍🤣😍👍😍😣😍👍😍🤣🤩😍🤣🤣😍🤣😍🤣😍🤣😍🤣🤩😍🤣🤩🤣😍🤣🤣😍🤣🤩🤣🤩😣😍👍😍🤣🤩🤣😍🤣😍🤣🤩🤣🤣🤩😍🤣😍👍😍🤩🤣🤣😍😍🤣😍🤣 pokonya seru, lucu, bagus deh

ghsandrade
ghsandradeLv6ghsandrade

I am still following the story, it is improving, I have no problem with the translation, keep up the good work. good luck (: D) ,..............................................................................................,

Reaper67
Reaper67Lv5Reaper67

great novel cant wait for more >>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP

Malik_Davis_10A
Malik_Davis_10ALv3Malik_Davis_10A

Nooooiiiiccccceeee!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend]

Discarded
DiscardedLv3Discarded

this fanfic setting is quite cool. having a new MC as rudy brother is indeed a genius stroke! i'm curious how they grow their relationship in the future. though i have one thing which really bug me tho that is the way narratives keep breaking third wall. if only the story is told like how the original book avoid mentioning other literature too much! also arthur is a man who read mushoku tensei is a fatal flaw. that means that rudy and the whole world is a fictional character made up book writer. how do you solve that fact in the future? what if the original mushoku tensei turn out the world where rudy lives is actually alternate world? what about the god/beings who incarnate rudy? its become overly complicated and nonsensical. arthur should be a man cam from the same earth where pre-reincarnated rudy lived. but i guess it doesnt matter since the book is abandoned anyway

covestar
covestarLv13covestar

Reading this just made me realize how much I disliked the anime.. Not only that, the author pushes me he jokes too far to the point that chapters are made up of only comedic scenes.. It was funny at first, but it later began to get boring since the plot wasn’t being pushed forward.. It is 80% percent memes and 20% plot…

Daoiste7no3A
Daoiste7no3ALv1Daoiste7no3A

lots of mistakes, you make Mushoku Tensei world become really bad, The way you build your character makes me feel no emotions, almost skip the world building, characters, details just to satisfy yourselves

Japhet_Novabos
Japhet_NovabosLv1Japhet_Novabos

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CaptainBOO
CaptainBOOLv11CaptainBOO

Really liked this fanfic, hope the author or someo else keeps the story going.

Atul_Kesharwani_0307
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