Mushoku Tensei: Arthur Greyrat. The elder twin brother of Rudeus
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Mushoku Tensei: Arthur Greyrat. The elder twin brother of Rudeus


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Mushoku Tensei: Arthur Greyrat. The elder twin brother of Rudeus is a popular fanfic written by the author Rudeus_GreyratRoxy, covering OP MC, HARÉM, REINCARNATION, Anime & Comics genres. It's viewed by 1.5M readers with an average rating of 4.2/5 and 46 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 71 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.


(English is not my main language) I recommend reading at Chapter 31 if you want better quality. {BEWARE!! First time writing a fanfic so expect the quality is bad!! When I first started this I don't really care if my story is bad or not as long as I am having fun writing it.} I just moved it here from the novel section to the ff section. Quality is not so good in the first chapters and I don not plan to rewrite. Example is too much jokes in the early chapters(Even I'm getting ashamed I wrote something like that). Mushoku Tensei as the elder twin brother of Rudeus Greyrat. Cheats-> Haki, OP Body, Swordsmanship (I do not own Mushoku Tensei. It is owned by its rightful author.)


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As the Author I shamelessly review it as 5 star... 🙏🍾🎂💥.................................................................................


it's a great fanfic, is is interesting to read and have actual character development in them. even if the mc overpower there still a struggle and conflict in the story. the no bullshit op abilty that stack like some complicated RPG like super saiyan blood line, sharingan, etc that make most of fic is a sandbox game.the mc has a real characteristics not just a dumbass 2 dimensional card box with harem, and there a solid development of relationship this fiction. ability are still out of know where though, like learning anime based magic and technique like rokushiki without any step as if they suddenly can do it.


This had so much potential, a MC with overpowered sword abilities and some solid wishes. But what we get are really unfunny jokes, and an MC that seems to not mind sharing his woman. He allows Rudeus who is also a grown man to bathe with Roxy, sleep with her and shows her off naked. Also there is a weird chapter where the MC’s parents are fucking and Roxy gets off to them and then the 5 year old MC eats her out while his parents continue fucking. This whole fanfic is just weird as **** and not really entertaining which is a huge shame.


I was looking forward to reading this fanfiction because i loved the original. However, the chapters consist of nearly all fialogue and ver little setting. On Top of that the characters have very little or No buildup and react to situations in a way that makes them bland/dead


I'm gonna drop or hold reading this fic after 15 chapters, maybe in the future I try to read this fic again if this fanfic still alive by thrn. The MC personality didn't suit my taste, I know how he like Roxy but for a self insert looks pathetic to me like some anime harem protagonist. Everyone knows even maybe Roxy feels he really like her but why he plead her like that(maybe factor was de-age in 5 yes old) but still you author indicating that he mature enough. Well the concept was good tho but this early life of fic didn't suit my taste, it feels like there's two protagonist in this fic but this one the self-insert feels like want grow together with the original protagonist of the story. Feels like less version of beta MC. Its just my opinion.


it gets too messed up and too much gags and the character's personality is just all over the place he would start crying for no reason , get emotional also for stupid things , and tbh mc just sucks with all that cuck bs and kind of ntr scenes and him being ok with them is just eww , also what the hell is with that noble crap like just get it together! and being noble doesn't mean being stupidly good/merciful/kind but what annoys me the most is the personality and mood swings like for god's sake decide on one either make him an ***** with ***** reactions or just make him a kid with no memories of his past life don't make it both cuz other than being confusing af its also god damn annoying !!


This is my honest review from me. All joke or comedy in this novel is Cringe even in your otaku's senses. I can't laugh and just put my disgusted faces when I was read this novel. Here is my own rating of this novel in this picture below.


not recommended for selfish people who want to be free from the chains of destiny ~ And well .. if you are someone who wants to follow scenarios, to be toyed with and bound by fate, this is for you ~


One of the best fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍


sorry but no.....just no.... even after the first few chapters its still bad.....i tried skipping to the middle parts of the novel...yep...its not just the start thats cringe its all throughout.....if you dont mind having your face minimizing from too much cringe go ahead. well i mean the author di say he did this for fun so.....meh....only meh😑


Despite there are still chapters left for me to read, I can't help but write a review in hopes for the author to see it. Even if he/she doesn't, I hope that I could help someone make a decision from either start reading this fanfiction or not. So, here we go. Please bear in mind that the second paragraph can be very rude. Paragraphs after it is my overall review, so you can skip the second one if you want. First and foremost, I will start with the one thing I hate (almost to the point of me being abhorrent of it, not joking)... The Fucking anime 'references,' especially in and after the graduation chapters. I don't hate anime, but the author just write so much of it that I can't stand it. Whenever I even see a glimpse of the author writing the references, I will skip that chapter even if I ended up skipping half of what he/she wrote. Oh yeah, I skipped most of the graduation chapters, only reading half of "Graduation 1," some parts of 2 and 3, and the moment where Roxy leaves. I reckoned those were the chapters that made people drop reading this. Almost forgot about the roleplays. I hate that as well. Whew, with that out of the way, let's start the review. The writing is okay. But I think if the author used a website like Grammarly, it could be better. Even if he/she doesn't, its not a problem as people could read it well... for me at least. Oh yeah, the author should decide if he/she wanted to use either Japanese or English for honorifics. The way he/she write something like "Lord Arthur(-sama) and Lord Rudeus(-sama)" just grinds my gears a bit. If you can't write a consistent character, at least be consistent in writing... well, he/she kinda is tho'. The character? Its a no for me. The author should've put a little bit more thought into the MC's character. I did just read until chapter 29 (by the time I write this review) so author probably already fixed it. As for the story development, it follows the original (kinda) so I don't have any problems with it. Its the same for world background. Since the world is already established by virtue of the fanfiction title, the author doesn't have to write too much of it. But he/she did managed to write the world well enough for someone like me to understand (I only read the manga long ago), so huge props for the author 👏. No comment on update stability. Overall, I would recommend this fanfiction if a person just wants to read something (like eating a snack). But if a person wants to get immersed into what he/she reads, then I suggest you go elsewhere. I know that my second paragraph is very harsh, but please don't think that I'm attacking the author personally. Its well within his/her right to write, so the author can write whatever he/she wants. Obligatory happy new year 🎉


Didn't live up to expectations. From the first chapter he limited himself to a very low mana reserve, which in no way can exceed the limit of advanced magic. Didn't live up to expectations. From the first chapter he limited himself to a very low mana reserve, which in no way can exceed the limit of advanced magic.


I do hope you can make him and his harem immortal or at least live for a few thousand years. and can you speed up. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍


Loving it ...........................................................................................................................................


This is a good FanFict, along with OP characters, spices of romance, some 18+ scenes, and perverted MC: 3 too, with good character development although I think I can get to the arc when Rudeus becomes an *****, well, good job Author ! spirit!


Capitulo 21 en este momento, me da rabia eso de que le está afectando ser un niño, tiene más de 20 años de la vida anterior y le afecta ser niño, también está eso de ser muy filiar en la mayoría de novelas que leo, normalmente pasa cuando los escritores tuvieron buenos padres o no se por que putas, pero que me maltraten sin dejarme explicar, y lo peor de todo un golpe en la cara, te aseguro que ya nada va a ser como antes, también está esto de que no cambia nada en la historia o eso hasta el momento, dónde está el puto efecto mariposa, no solo pasa cuando viajan al pasado autor, puede que mejore, vamos a leer 7 capitulos mas, si mejora escribo una respuesta a esta reseña, si no lo hago quiere decir que sigue siendo igual de malo.


good story I look forward to the continuation of the story 🙏🙏🙏👍🙏🙏🙏👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍


Que buena novela gracias por el tiempo y el trabajo que asen por esta novela gracias y en espera de más 😉🙃🤤 la historia es muy buena y esperó mucho que no la abandone como mucho




THIS IS IT!! A HIDDEN GEM!!! A HIDDEN GEM I SAY!! i like hardworking MC and hope he will become OP, i mean real OP, that he can beat orstein when they meet. There is little bit error in spelling, but thats not hinder the story for me, it's still has good storyflow and i really enjoy it.


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