Jovami6729
very good, I really liked the type of the system and the mc, itβs not that mc that kills and itβs all good he has a change in personality while interacting with hina and smoker, the only part I didnβt like so much was that the mc was very hurried in the world of one piece he could learn a little fencing while he was there but other than that ok, I wonder if there will be romance later if yes, harem or not?
The novel is quite good by Webnovel standards so no complaints in that front. In terms of story development, it progress at a speed of a rocket with little to no dialogues. The character design also left many things to be desired but it's a novel created as a hobby so I'm not really gonna harp on that too much. Anyway, good luck on your future endeavors, good sir.