Reviews of Multiverse Lottery Conquest

He wasn’t given any wishes, but it’s moot point since his lottery keeps giving him great things. You made him a 3 years old, but you’re already forcing ***** situations on him with one woman that should be resistant to forming relationships. Semiramis originally having only lv6 in intelligence is ridiculous. She is half caster and learned other things besides magic, and was a successful queen. She is quite smart. He went to gringots and claimed fanon titles without having confirmed beforehand that those titles were real. Trial of Peter with veritaserum, and those who claimed imperius weren’t unmasked. The meeting with the Delacour with the classic damsel in distress was so forced it wasn’t funny, and he revealed the extent of his metamorphmagus ability (which is more fanon than canon). Still 3 years old and he’s already OP, with half of the major plot points resolved, and him not needing to go to Hogwart. And of course there is nothing wrong with said 3yo acting like an *****. I don’t even see any point in him staying in HP verse for his 1st year. Too much unneeded Cool and Awesome. Mediocre plot and poor char development.

Its kinda meh. The author does not include wishes, but he did give the MC all the things he would've gotten if he had a chance. Instead he put a twist on how the MC acquired some BS powers. So far I've seen alot of five star reviews with out any substance so I'll write what I've seen so far. That MC is in HP world as harry potter. It isn't very original at all as the MC acts meek at the abuse he goes through. He gets a starter pack that will make him instantly OP in this world and makes it pointless when he goes to Hogwarts. This is due to my belief that the MC will already know how to do everything before then thanks to his cheat items. The lottery system has been done countless times before and I've read nothing original. Pretty much a god gives a nobody a system that magically makes the MC OP. Pretty uninteresting as the author didn't give any goal for the MC to strive for after six chapters. I'd rate this a 3.5/5 for being interesting and readable.

Rushed I don't know but I kinda get vibe that this FF will be like the another one before. Op too fast, problem that for plot wise at original story solved too fast, saving people here and there without reason. Make another man in mc circle have harem ( don't really care but most people wouldn't like it).

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everything is good as long as you don't nerf and most of the drama is bull****, it would also be better if every MC gets skills that are useful for battle and life savers are directly used the skill

The MC is that kind that gets into relationships while he is still a baby, and acts unnaturally mature and smart for someone at his age but and nobody question that. This is one of those fanfics that the MC does some world changing things as a 5 years old and nobody asks how he done that . Ex:1 create a solution for for the werewolves and become famous as an Alchemist and runes master 2 defeat and kill an ***** and trained lord(nott's father) 3 opened a company as an underage 4 has a unnatural proficiency on wandless magic for someone who probably shouldn't even be using magic at five 5 can transform into a weretiger and nobody ask how. After that i simply stoped counting but there is more . Advice: throw all the common sense and half of your brain into the trash can bin if want to read this and maybe enjoy .

MC getting other dudes a harem is just like thinking of women as collectables. I would like if there is no Pokémon collecting but nobody listens to me. To balance things out, this man-wh0re MC should help a girl to get a reverse harem. I don't know why the heck am I even writing this... For now, this story is not for me but I will still keep it in my library as I think it may get better in the future. I think that the romance is kinda forced. I mean who wants to have a relationship with a philanderer fungus like the MC? For the powers and stuff, it really takes away the Harry potter vibe. The idea is good but not for me. Bringing sacred gears, summons, devils, and other stuff looks kinda unreal in HP world. I don't like the MC's personality too. I don't know why, but it just pisses me off. Including the other magical countries was a good idea but I did not like the way it was portrayed. Bringing Lady Death and Fate was also not to my tastes. Btw GL. I'm out...

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The writing quality is Great, maybe a few misspelled words here and there but absolutely nothing to take away from the story, so far great stability in the updates and those updates are eagerly awaited to be sure, and the best part, and absolutely fantastically enjoyable story with an intelligent man character who is easy to like. This is definitely a story you should check out as well as the authors other story, both are truly fantastic.

i like the story, good rate of updates, sound grammar and cuz the mc Fvckd over fudge and used him for publicity, the story has a lot of growth potential as well. *CLICKS TONGUE* NOICE

To be honest, I give 5 points only because of Semiramis and Grayfia. Well, and to support the author, since I still like the work. Hehe. **. Don't be upset about bad reviews, you won't please everyone, so write the way you like it.

It's great and I'm loving it, might good to have more interactions with his summons though especially the ones that will join his harem ( grayfia and Semiramis ) but other then that I think it's great

Overall I think it's good keep up the good work But dont feel pressured because it's your work and your the one who wants to write this fix don't let others tell you otherwise

Author go to other worlds and why is he staying too much in HP verse he is the strongest there..........the title says "MULTIVERSE" there's no adventure at all

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I absolutely love it. Good luck on the novel my guy and much love to everyone. 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀