Multiversal: The Shop

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Kekekeke, even after the author mass deleted low reviews to bump up the previous 3.8 rating back to 4.8, in just a few days, it still went back to 4.2. Kek😂

It's too early to comment on this but(only 6 chapter read) "Story Development" and "World Background" i can't comment as i haven't read much and let's come "Character Design" mc is so weird, how do i explain mc previous life "poor" its okay but now he so rich right? so why still pretending to be poor undeveloped character (unaccustomed to his new life like never lived) i think he mc needs improvement.

Q decir el prota no evoluciona nada es simp y no enfrentar a su hermana y hora tiene un poder más roto op nanana zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I passed by chance and remembered that I hadn't evaluated it yet. .......................................

To be honest i actually enjoy this novel pretty much. Don't understand why people hate the Lorelei x Shirou relationship, i mean it could have been better if we actually saw how their chemistry developed but it just feels rushed, yet still it doesn't effect the story that much. I like the relationship between the mc and his own harem, but i reccomend showing more of the nasuverse waifus before officially adding them to the harem, since we only saw their childhoods in few chapters. I don't see any point in adding kuroinu but don't hate it either since, in any media involving nasuverse darkness is expected. You can't just expect everything to be sunshine and rainbows, but still, it could have been done better if the customer was queen olga and the invasion of the black dog has only recently started, but i don't care as personality of kuroinu girls doesn't seem likeable to me. I like the development with ai hoshino. It was pretty well done.

Story is pretty good but i gave it only 4 stars as MC's attitude towards power is really bad, I mean I can get wanting to live in peace but not wanting to better yourself in fate world is just crazy. Mc mostly depends on his sister's might or family's power to live this relaxed life but fails to understand how risky it is when there are many hidden enemies. Also he just decided to go to japan just because japan is land of dreams for him which again is very risky move as he would be leaving his family's main area of influence. If he was powerful enough it would be fine and even though i know nothing will happen to him because of plot I just can't take this mc seriously.

Didn't read yet but i do know... Anybook from Charlotte is good... Btw author u gonna continue Bizarre life of Tadano Or what? And yes please don't drop this book too...

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Me gusto mucho, la verdad me sorprendio por que hace mucho no encuentro este tipo de fanfics y los tipo tienda no son asi, tambien casi siempre sube actualizacion excepto una vez que el creador se enfermo, pero 10/10

this garbage why did i read this thing. ahhhh I'm regretting that i have read till 40 chapters. don't waste your time reading this ####. even dropped fics. are better than this garbage.

Its Charlottes so yeah thats it............

When I see cover from another anime/manga/movie or whatever and there is none of this in story it's insta 1 star. Thank you.

это просто плохо, и добавить нечего

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Fanfic novels that are just to relieve fatigue and boredom. I support you author! keep up the good work with your novel and try to expand the multiverse story to make it more interesting. Thank You!