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Reviews of Mr. Xiao's Unconditional Love

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Mr. Xiao's Unconditional Love

Yi Xiyan

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ElizaA
ElizaALv3ElizaA

I enjoy this actually. 40 ch in, something about it is refreshing, even if we have the usual tropes. 1. Reborn FL who treated ML like trash in her last life & now realizes how dumb she was 2. stepmom and stepsister are annoying 3. best friend is really a wolf in sheep's clothing 4. FL has old memories, is smart, op op HOWEVER 1. FL is strong, steady and has friendly interactions with people. She's quick to disprove rumors, so it's not like the world is against her. People who she used to bully are even starting to like her because she changed her ways. 2. ML is NOT an unfeeling ice cube who she has to try really hard to woo. He likes her, she likes him. They flirt over the pager and it's really cute. 3. They have a HEALTHY relationship. No forceful pulls or aphrodisiac or anything like that. Face to face confession. Wholesome hugs. They communicate and ML doesn't fall for tricks. 4. FL grandpa is totally on her side and doesn't fall for tricks either. I expect to see him help take down the white lotuses. 5. Just introduced, but her foster family seems like a good bunch. Even if she doesn't have doting parents, at least we get the feel good moments here.

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fieryscarlett
fieryscarlettLv4fieryscarlett

I want this story to be continued..... There r elements in this book that attract me... Please pretty pretty please.... Please continue this book.... πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

Winters_Rain
Winters_RainLv4Winters_Rain

Raw title: ιͺηˆ·ηˆ±ζˆ‘ε…₯ιͺ¨ Status: --- { I couldn't find raws for this novel. If someone finds post status here} \\o_o// .................................................................

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

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Queros12
Queros12Lv15Queros12

If you want to loose your power stones feel free to read this novel. The first half of the novel was good, until you get to the second part. Translation got worse, characters nickname were change to something weird to the point of asking yourself if you were still reading the same novel. That's not even the most infuriating part. Many chapter would have different title but have the same exact content as previous chapters. It also feel like at least 2 previous chapter would be match together, it totally messed up the flow of the story. Many of the readers including myself left comments but it doesn't seem that the author, translator or editor are reading the comments, or maybe they are and they just don't care. It already happened 4 times, before I decided to drop this novel. Character design and story development are worth a little more star, but the feeling of being cheated don't sit well with me. My sincerest condolences to those who bought privileged chapters.

_Eisen_
_Eisen_Lv15_Eisen_

Recent chapters look like someone hacked the translator, or sabotaged them. Guys, premium is not cheap, I'm not paying for this garbage. Please fix it.

MIKALUNA
MIKALUNALv14MIKALUNA

I wanna know who the translator is. So many scenes have been cut, and those aren't even smut scene!! I love this book, but I don't appreciate what the translator do to this story.

Izanami_
Izanami_Lv3Izanami_

This novel is seriously awesome. To be honest at first I thought it was the same pattern of reincarnation story.so I lost interest. But I thought ok if after five chapter I feel boring I would left it. But then lu xiaochun entered into the story and I was like wow it's awesome. It's definitely a new pattern of story I never read. This story is really awesome. The writer of this story really captured my mind. Since webnovel haven't published all the chapters yet I searched in other sites and turned out they were translated but unfiltered. But I so into the story that I read it cause if I don't read it I start to zone out what happened after that. No matter how good the story is I always lose interest at some point. But this story after lu xiaochun's entry I never lost interest. Really author respect +99999. I highly recommend this novel. Just awesome. One of my favourite. 😘😘😘😘😘 (P.S. lu xiaochun is ye qiao and lu beixiao's son from previous life. If someone only started reading then they won't understand who he is)

AmaSu
AmaSuLv5AmaSu

This started out well, the story is fairly interesting and the translation quality not bad. However, after ch200 the quality started to deteriorate quite a bit. I am not opposed to time skips, especially if appropriate and done well, but more and more time skips were put in rather randomly and continuously jarringly. Quite a few chapters were edited quite poorly. Characters dialogue took strange turns, which may or may not be because of the translation deterioration? Some of the most recent chapters seem to have important plot deleted entirely (chapter 305), either that or chapters are missing. Which wouldn't be surprising since chapters 285, 288, 289, and 292 are repeats of earlier chapters, a fact which has been noted in those chapters' comments... and they still haven't been removed. So save your coins and as of 03-23-2021 don't buy those chapters. I'm just glad I binge read the last 100 or so chapters during a "read for free" day and didn't actually waste any coins/passes on them. If you don't mind using coins/passes on chapters containing the described flaws (or if you catch a free day) then the story can be considered not half bad...but it also can be considered barely half good (hence my score of 3.4 stars).

Kat_DC
Kat_DCLv12Kat_DC

I really enjoy this novel and the relationships of the characters. However, I really hate that there are missing scenes. It makes absolutely no sense to me. What’s the purpose of cutting the affectionate or passionate scenes that were in the raws? And there isn’t even a proper tie-in. When the scene skips and goes straight to the next scene, the readers are very confused. Also, things are mentioned... like the first kiss or the β€œRed ruby” (hickey) on her neck that happened in skipped scenes and NO ONE knew what the heck that came from? It’s confusing and sucks the flow right out of the story.

njkapoor
njkapoorLv4njkapoor

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Daydreamer18
Daydreamer18Lv4Daydreamer18

Recently I got in the habit of picking new arrivals since most of the novels I have finished and the remaining one are all with rapey,stupid husband who don't know how to control themselves and don't even say sorry cause according to them it's their love.This is different from it.We got a powerful ML but he is just..... so cute.Finally someone who acts of his age.I love the ML very much. Is there anyone who have ever reader this book before. If so please tell me the title in English. Hope it get picked as I can't find it anywhere.

Red_Delin
Red_DelinLv15Red_Delin

Don't read this novel. I wasted so much coins for the privilege chapters just to get repeat publication of chapters. A lot of readers are already complaining but the author is not taking any action. Author, i know you need to earn for your writing efforts but cheating your readers is really mean.

read2live
read2liveLv15read2live

it's good story to read, I would of given 5 stars if the chapters weren't all mixed up/repeated chapters and causing confusion. I hope the author can fix it and it will flow better.

PrinceKookie
PrinceKookieLv5PrinceKookie

The start is pretty interesting for me. The FL reborns and fixes the mistakes she made in her past life (like any other rebirth book but idk why this book is just different) The FL and ML don't have much age gap which is pretty shocking because in almost all books the main characters have at least 5-7 years of age gap. The interaction between them both is quite interesting too. The FL isn't hiding her intentions, slowy going after the ML but rather going all out on him and shaking his innocent heart violently πŸ˜‚ There isn't too much drama either which is a nice change (I'm not saying that there isn't any drama at all) The translation is excellent as well. Until now I haven't found a mistake. I really hope this book gets chosen! I just can't stop reading❣️

FAOFAOf
FAOFAOfLv14FAOFAOf

Story is interesting and seems to be good. Just wish the translator/editor would do a better job. Half the time it's almost like reading a machine translation.

Lisa_Lyss
Lisa_LyssLv12Lisa_Lyss

I don't understand why there are so many parts missing / cut. It really spoil the storyline. I hope the translator follow and translate it exactly like the chinese novel. Don't ruin the novel. PLEASE DONT CUT THE STORY.

AMIRA
AMIRALv5AMIRA

The translation work is missing many chapters and descriptions as well as the interaction and intimacy of main characters.Many important scenes has been cut off.This is horrible.

xxrinachan
xxrinachanLv2xxrinachan

I really like how sweet the story is, but FL's emotions are very... unstable LMAO one moment she's shouting and fierce, the next she's dripping tears. (she's been reborn I wanna see more maturity) also!!! what is with the quality of the recent uploads,,, I mean, we pay for quality. this is more like MTL

JayJ23
JayJ23Lv12JayJ23

I like this book. been waiting for translation. I mtled it before. it's a really good story however translation have parts missing so it's hard to understand some parts.