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Reviews of Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!

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Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!

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valiantxvillainous
valiantxvillainousLv3valiantxvillainous

A fantasy romance full of lighthearted humor and charm! This story was a really fun and easy read with cute heart-throbbing moments that make the reader clench their heart. I really enjoyed all the cute and funny references thrown here and there by the characters and the mystery behind the Moon Rabbit. At times there are expressions that are used a little awkwardly and the grammar a bit strange. But in general, the author writes in a very captivating and beautiful way, there were rarely moments where I found it difficult to understand. I feel like the characters and the story are in general were rather innocent. There’s almost a romantic and sweet naivety that clouds the entire piece. While at times enjoyable, I did find that the characters almost felt a little too childish and pure for my tastes. There were times I felt like they could use a little more depth. I found the beginning to be a little too slow and mundane for my personal tastes. It was sweet, but for around the first ten chapters, I felt like there was little to no conflict and I had very little reason to read the next chapter after the one that I’ve ready. The main character doesn’t seem to have a strong personality and seems a little directionless in her life. I hope she can grow more and show us a stronger personality as the story progresses! All in all, a very sweet and fun read. I recommend this title to those who like light-hearted romances with a pinch of fantasy elements. Good work, Author, and keep at it!!

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weeelizabeth
weeelizabethLv15weeelizabeth

Wow! Simply 💗l.o.v.e.💗 this. 🥰😍😘 It's awesome🏅 and a real sparkling gem. Breathtakingly unique. A refreshing storyline too, about Bunny🐰Xue (Hint: see book title🤭). His love interest is a rather dense university student😇 who has attracted many other admirers. So certainly no lack of male leads here.😂 Currently this novel has way too little readership.🤔 So give this book a try!😊 At the moment, I have read till chapter 59. 🥰😍😘

Tinalynge
TinalyngeLv15Tinalynge

It is quite rare that I give a novel a five star review, however this novel deserves it. This is one of my competitors in the Spirity Awards Contest, but I am honored to be up against it. This novel is written really well. The words flow nicely and the story drags you into it. You are unable to let it go before you have read it all, and gosh is it good! I have added the story to my library, and will be following it in the future. And a bit of motivation: Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story! I hope that you will continue to write this novel, and I will be eager to follow it throughout the next many months! Keep up the good work!

pokbjh
pokbjhLv3pokbjh

WOW, This stowy is brilliant UvW. All jokes aside it reminds me off my peaceful days off the coast of the mushroom Kingdom me Peach and Bowser having a bbq. You might ask how? This story is full of action and romance and comedy!!!! But I bet you have never been wasted with bowser going to Luigi's mansion and pretending to be a ghost that was great. Ah, good times. Where was I? Ah, yesss This story is 5 stars out of 5 stars and gets the MARIO SINB SILVER SEAL OF APPROVAL.

KingBiBiK
KingBiBiKLv12KingBiBiK

Woah. This is surprisingly well written. The author's style is different, in fact too different from the norms of web novels. While it has a slice of life vibe, it generates a ******** literature feeling. Probably due to this, I found some parts hard to follow right away. I had to work my brain double strength to keep up with the novel after my brain got corrupted by a lot of WNs. The concept is intriguing. I just hope that the author simplifies so that the plebians in this platform could understand better.

Supersam362
Supersam362Lv3Supersam362

A very well crafted story, there are quite a few romance novels and im glad to see that this story is able to have some features that separate it from the others. The grammer is good, the pace is nice, and the flow is natural. A great novel to be sure, I wish you luck fellow contestant.

Roseanne_Velvet
Roseanne_VelvetLv11Roseanne_Velvet

The early chapters are nice in their fluffy own kind of way, so if you like lighthearted comedy and a slice-of-life feel—it could be the perfect fit for you. The Author seems to be adding cultivation elements into the mix, but it's easy enough to understand and adds a little more oomph to the story. It could be a bit distracting for those without background in it though, so a little guide at the beginning would help. The characters are unique in their own way, though as one reviewer said, a bit too innocent... it has a whimsical feel to it despite the modern setting. All in all, interested to see what this story can bring. Goodluck Author!

Yime
YimeLv11Yime

Nice story Author👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Already added to my library More chapters pleeeeaaaasssseeeeeee........ 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

MaxwellKHA
MaxwellKHALv4MaxwellKHA

This is a good book, but oftentimes, the book is confusing. Still, I appreciate the grammar of the author. Or maybe this is mainly because I am not used to reading romance novel yet. But overall, the good is book and exciting. I hope the author can continue her book. Thanks.

Shinyyy
ShinyyyLv2Shinyyy

I don't usually read stories like these, but it has a way of easing a new reader like me to enjoy the show. Its not heavy nor too easygoing to digest. The main character is really nice and a cheapskate, that I can relate to. 😂

prada_murthy
prada_murthyLv13prada_murthy

This is not type of book I usually read. However, I must say that there is a creative touch in it. It is interesting and the banter between the three people is funny. Character and plot development is nicely done and there are almost no grammatical errors. It is a little confusing sometimes, hope you can work on it. Also please update it regularly. Other than these two, no other complaints. Keep up the good work author. All the best.

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

TL:DR A well written story, this one. Would recommend for those that fancy the genre. Grammar has little to no errors. Prose is natural, as well as the dialogue. Quite frankly, a high quality piece of fiction. Keep on writing 👍

Nightmare_weaver
Nightmare_weaverLv2Nightmare_weaver

This is a really good novel. The cover art and the synopsis attracted me which lead me to read this but the story itself was so good that I just couldn't stop reading. I thoroughly enjoyed this and it was a great experience. I hope the author posts more chapters as I just can't wait for more. This story has some good potential and I hope you get the love and support you deserve

Whalerus
WhalerusLv10Whalerus

So far, I’m really loving this book and I can’t wait to see what comes next! It had me hooked from the very first word, so I highly recommend it.

SAM_Z
SAM_ZLv5SAM_Z

Nice. Super nice. Very well written and nice style. I like the slice of life mixed in. No grammatical errors and smooth transitions. Added to my library 😁

RABBITICOL
RABBITICOLLv4RABBITICOL

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LESAH
LESAHLv13LESAH

Nice Catchy synopsis. Got me really interested in this Moon Rabbit appearing on her roof. Nice way for a cultivation story... Writing quality is good. Just started this story and I must say... I'm loving it. Adding to my library to follow up. U've got my votes... Come read guys, u'd love it. Would do another review when I have gone far. Kip it up author. 👍

BerriApplepi
BerriApplepiLv11BerriApplepi

I love the way you write! It's really good and the words are smooth! The story is unique and it's interesting, not the usual stories here at all.~ Keep up the good work! 💖💖💖💖

WriterWen
WriterWenLv10WriterWen

Wow! Just wow! This story is something that you would regret not reading! Keep up the good work, dear author! I'll be waiting for your next updates! Good luck! 😉😊

Norah_Koch
Norah_KochLv5Norah_Koch

Creative. I haven't expected the moon rabbit to be so cute... then again, I kind of expected it. The story is as sweet as it can be... might give me diabetes. I love the dynamics of their relationships. Good going, Author-sama.