Reviews of Moonlit Chronicles of the Unambitious Magician
Moonlit Chronicles of the Unambitious Magician
Zimrence
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
I haven't read the older version so I can't say what are things that change so I'll write the review based on the current story. First of all the plot is quite good, different from the other fanfics this one doesn't start with an overpowered MC, so us reader can follow the progress the MC makes. He isn't like most magus so that's a plus. I always hated those lunatic types. Secondly, you made one of my favorite character a waifu, Finally someone included her! Thirdly you did your research very well on other things. A reminder though, it's best not to put TOO many characters crossover from type moon franchise because some timeline won't match up and sometime they're a part of a parallel version where there is different history and all. So doing that may cause a lot of plot holes to appear. But if author can make it fit all together then why not? Anyway I look forward to more chapters and Good luckπ
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