Reviews of Monster Apocalypse: Pokemon Online

My story is a new spin on most Pokemon Fan-Fics. I don't even know if it is considered a Fan-Fic because I only use the pokemon and no characters from the games. Anyways please tell me what you think about this new style to pokemon stories. It's not something you see every day.

Nice, there are some grammer issues but its already better than most of the fanfics on this sight in that area. Pls dont drop .....................................

Interesting way to twist a common topic (pokemon). The pokemon are now the bad ones? They are similar to the goblins and kobolds of normal fantasy games if I'm getting this correct. (I'm only on chapter 3 as of writing this). Anyways great topic and is very interesting keep it up!