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Reviews of Modern Day Asura (DROPPED)

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Modern Day Asura (DROPPED)

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Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzLv11Black_Rabbit_Oz

Writing Quality - There is some minor grammatical mistake, but it did not ruin the reading experience. Character Design - The description is vivid to the point I can portray what the author wants me to portray in my mind Overall It is an excellent read. Good luck author, keep fighting!

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HiDemon
HiDemonLv2HiDemon

I like the story so I gave you a 5 star. I really love how you described the characters too. Keep up the good work. You only have a few basic writing errors and punctuation errors that can be fixed. I’ll keep up with this story don’t forget to experiment with your pacing and such.

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothLv12MotivatedSloth

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.

niddaii2
niddaii2Lv1niddaii2

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Purple_Khaos
Purple_KhaosLv13Purple_Khaos

Author, I think u should rewrite the book. I tried reading it and it was so confusing. I endured it for a couple more chapters, because the book had potential and was interesting, but, alas, I can no longer endure it.

Kenlinvert1
Kenlinvert1Lv1Kenlinvert1

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Nekoman
NekomanLv2Nekoman

forgot to give this book a review when i read it for the first time, anyway... overall, this book is good, like good to read, would really recomend it to read it, anyway, back to reading!

fswmoq80
fswmoq80Lv1fswmoq80

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Nekoman
NekomanLv2Nekoman

Writing quality is good, detailed and explains enough for readers to understand, the world background is pratically same, detailed I won't get into too much details here, the novel is uite good and interesting for me myself

Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightAuthorPurple_Midnight

I would have loved to say that my book is one where things will be figured out later. But that is just what I would like to say, I actually made mistakes when I made the book, but since I'm an author, I will just shamelessly promote the book like I did it intentionally

taxi_pineapple
taxi_pineappleLv2taxi_pineapple

Everything about your novel hooked me in! I loved the characters development and the story line, all in all loved your novel! Thank you for working hard and writing such a good novel!