Modern Day Asuras

Writing Quality - There is some minor grammatical mistake, but it did not ruin the reading experience. Character Design - The description is vivid to the point I can portray what the author wants me to portray in my mind Overall It is an excellent read. Good luck author, keep fighting!

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Real Revieww now The writing quality has visibly improved from the first chapter to here, any average joe could see the improvement in the author's writing. The update stability was somewhat random, but now has some kind of chaotic schedule?!! The story is developing well, the mc is still as frivolous but he has his priorities set The character design has evolved from that crude description to what it has become today. As for the world background, i don't need to say much, read the book and find out

I like the story so I gave you a 5 star. I really love how you described the characters too. Keep up the good work. You only have a few basic writing errors and punctuation errors that can be fixed. I’ll keep up with this story don’t forget to experiment with your pacing and such.

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.

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Author, I think u should rewrite the book. I tried reading it and it was so confusing. I endured it for a couple more chapters, because the book had potential and was interesting, but, alas, I can no longer endure it.

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Amazing, recommended readd it reas it, i recommend this book to all who will ever encounter it, ignore these ramblings, blah read, blah read, blah read blah read

BEst novel ever, more more more more more more chapters, keep it up author san Dont give up, Keep it up keep pushing author san Blah Blah blah

forgot to give this book a review when i read it for the first time, anyway... overall, this book is good, like good to read, would really recomend it to read it, anyway, back to reading!

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Writing quality is good, detailed and explains enough for readers to understand, the world background is pratically same, detailed I won't get into too much details here, the novel is uite good and interesting for me myself

I would have loved to say that my book is one where things will be figured out later. But that is just what I would like to say, I actually made mistakes when I made the book, but since I'm an author, I will just shamelessly promote the book like I did it intentionally

Everything about your novel hooked me in! I loved the characters development and the story line, all in all loved your novel! Thank you for working hard and writing such a good novel!